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Stress is increasing day by day what are the causes and solution

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job on to which they are unable to perform the recreational activities
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they may become prey of an exit II
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more
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of technology gadgets as
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people
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spent with their family apart from this number of consumed most of their
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time
in front of social media moving for that there are multifarious solution to overcome this issue
first
and the foremost
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government
should
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fix
the working hours of PayPal
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of individuals do work
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for a certain period of
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never the less
they can do physical activity in their life in their free
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time
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so
they can stay fit and healthy
moreover
parents and teachers should create awareness among
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people
about the
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bad
effects of using too much technology for the more they can
easily
strong bonding among them something up I tend to read rate that hectic schedule and
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use
of technology are the two main causes of this apprising trend
was held
with the
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help
of
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Government
and individuals this you can
be solved
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IELTS essay Stress is increasing day by day what are the causes and solution

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
236 words
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