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storm water is recycled in an Australian city.

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The picture highlights the process in which storm water is recycled in an Australian city. From a general perspective, the technique of recycling storm water involves 4 steps, from harvesting on rainy days to producing clean water which is stored and then reused on sunny days. In the beginning stage, rain water is collected via drainage systems and then flows in pipes to 4-steps water recycling plants to remove the dregs and toxics. The first of the water treatment plant, the wastes such as plastic and rubbish are discarded and then small particles are filtered out. Next, microscopic impurities such as bacteria, viruses, molecules and salt are removed. Following this, to make sure that impurities are completely removed and safe for users, storm water is disinfected with chlorinating at 4mg/litre. After that the clean water is stored in a chamber, sent back to Australian households and reused on sunny days.
The picture highlights the process in which storm
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water
is recycled
in an Australian city. From a general perspective, the technique of recycling storm
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water
involves 4 steps, from harvesting on rainy days to producing clean
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water
which
is stored
and then reused on sunny days.

In the beginning stage, rain
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water
is collected
via drainage systems and then flows in pipes to 4-steps
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water
recycling plants to remove the dregs and toxics. The
first
of the
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water
treatment plant, the wastes such as plastic and rubbish
are discarded
and then
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small
particles
are filtered
out.
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, microscopic impurities such as bacteria, viruses, molecules and salt
are removed
.

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make
sure that impurities are completely removed and safe for users, storm
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water
is disinfected
with chlorinating at
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4mg
/
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litre
. After that the clean
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is stored
in a chamber,
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sent
back to Australian households and reused on sunny days.
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IELTS essay storm water is recycled in an Australian city.

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  American English
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150 words
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