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Stock Market in world and india

Stock Market in world and india 9wqm0

Now days people use technology rapidly number of users increased day by day some people use technology for entertainment only but there are some smart human who use stock market for their extra income. Stock market is very useful for today’s generation to make money easier than ever but due to lack of knowledge some people faces problems such as loses, invest in wrong stock. But those people who have knowledge of stocks they can earn easily In our country almost 25 percent of people used stocks

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