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Steet talk about rich guys

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_OK everyone this is. . . . right? _yeah. . . _and you? _an employee isn't it clear listen Mr I'm in Harry _Ok OK I just have a quick question How do you get rich _oh do you wanna me to tell my secret if you wonder me to tell how old I am I would definitely say but I will God please forgive me _is that so disgusting for you to talk about _why not I'm going to talk about my key to success uh well I joined a fast-growing company now can I go _no I mean no wait what do you mean by that
_OK everyone this is.
.
.
.
right
?

_yeah.
.
.


_and you?

_an employee isn't it
clear
listen Mr I'm in Harry

_
Ok OK
I
just
have a quick question

How do you
get
rich

_oh do you wanna me to
tell
my secret if you wonder me to
tell
how
old
I am I would definitely say
but
I will

God
please
forgive me

_is that
so
disgusting for you to talk about

_why not I'm going to talk about my key to success uh well I
joined
a
fast
-growing
company
now
can I go

_no I mean no wait what do you mean by that
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IELTS essay Steet talk about rich guys

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
107 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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