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some people believe that television has had positive influence on society .Others believes it has had a negative influence on society .Which do you agree with and why , use detail and example

some people believe that television has had positive influence on society. Others believes it has had a negative influence on society. Which do you agree with and why, use detail and example qV6aX

In my opinion, I believe that television has had positive influence on society. There are two reasons for this. Firstly, TV is a good source of news it keep people to get information easy, and also informed them what happening around. For example when COVID 19 hit that the most of people watch television just to get correct information and what happened in the world. Secondly, you have different channel you can choose and watch your favorite programe like National Geography, Comedy films. . . . That why i believe the television is a good way to watch and to relaxing yourself

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positive
 influence on society. There are two reasons for this.

Firstly
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good
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keep
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people
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get
 information easy, and also
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people
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watch
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just
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get
 correct information and what happened in the world. Secondly
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different
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watch
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good
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watch
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