Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Sports as a subject in school education

Sports as a subject in school education kYBdR

Sports occupies a vital space in our lives. It keeps man physically, mentally fit and healthy. Sports is a such activity that can be taken up by any individual irrespective of his age. They can take part in sports at any age. Apart from keeping you fit and healthy it help you to remain more active in you daily routine. Education is necessary for every children as it sharps theirs brain and increases their learning ability. on other hand sports play equally important role as education it will make children more active in studies. Sports as a subject is very helpful for children as they are overburden with studies, it helps them to take off their stress and keep them fit. Sports provides children a another level of refreshment. So every school should consider sports as important as education. Their must be balance between both so that children can study smoothly.

Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "sport occupies".Sport occupies
Sports occupies
 a vital space in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
physically
, mentally fit and healthy. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
 is a such activity that can be taken
 up by any individual irrespective of his age. They can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 at any age. Apart from keeping you fit and healthy it Did you mean "helps"?helps
help
 you to remain more active in you daily routine. Education is necessary for every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "child"?child
children
 as it sharps theirs brain and increases their learning ability. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 other hand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 play equally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role as education it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 more active in studies. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
 as a subject is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 helpful for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 as they are Consider using a past participle here: "overburdened".overburdened
overburden
 with studies, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 them to take off their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 them fit. Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "sport provides".Sport provides
Sports provides
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 another level of refreshment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 every school should consider You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 as education. Their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be balance between both This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 can study smoothly
. 