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something about environmental problems

something about environmental problems 7rOK5

Environmental problems are a matter of concern these days. Humans polluted water, soil, air and they use excessive natural resources such as overuse of tree’s wood or destroying forests to build the house that causes deforestation, should be mentioned, deforestation is one of the main causes of global warming. also, environmental pollution causes climate change problems, horrible hurricanes, floods, and droughts are the outcomes of climate change. Sad to say, many countries suffer all these natural calamities in recent years. These problems aren’t related only to the environment but related to humans, animals, and plants that live on this planet. Of course, people have found solutions to environmental problems. like, recycling rubbish or planting new trees. But that is not enough, people have to change their lifestyle. Unfortunately, people forget that we are an integral part of nature. We must live in balance with the environment and care for it. people should realize that they aren’t the ultimate users of nature and must think of future generations

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problems
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use
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house
 that causes deforestation, should be mentioned
, deforestation is one of the main causes of global warming.

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also
, environmental pollution causes climate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
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. Sad to say, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 countries suffer all these natural calamities in recent years.

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problems
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only
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 on this planet.

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people
 have found solutions to environmental You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
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, recycling rubbish or planting new trees. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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enough
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people
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have to
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 their lifestyle.

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people
 forget that we are an integral part of nature. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in balance with the environment and care for it. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should realize that they aren’t the ultimate users of nature and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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