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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many argue that phone calls should be restricted in public settings, some believe that people have their right to talk in any situation. It is agreed that while sometimes phone calls can be irritating, people have their own reasons for making phone calls. This essay will discuss both sides before coming to a conclusion. It is true that calling someone via mobile phone can sometimes be an annoyance for people around. In public places where visitors need to be calm and quiet, a phone call may be a major interruption. For instance, chatting on mobile phone in public library will bother many who are trying to focus on reading and studying. Furthermore, many people make long phone calls on unimportant matters. In the lens of other people, these calls are merely a selfish act as it disturbs many people. Therefore, making phone calls in these areas are unacceptable. However, not all phone calls are unimportant and people don’t have the choice of making or accepting calls in public areas. Everyone has their underlying reason to contact someone, it may be personal reasons, business, or emergency calls. These are reasons that the public couldn’t know and have to tolerate regardless of the place. When people receive a call from someone asking for emergency help, they have to accept it, despite being in public places. If they couldn’t make that calls, the consequences might be very serious. Hence, for this reason, banning calls in public places doesn’t make much sense. In conclusion, the use of mobile phone to communicate in public areas may cause interruption for others, However, considering that there are important reasons to call, banning is not at all necessary.
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who are trying to focus on reading and studying.
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, banning is not at all necessary.
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IELTS essay Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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