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Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

A fair amount of individuals tend to believe that ambition is a necessity trait. It is crucial for a person to be ambitious. I believe that it is a negative characteristic and it will be explicited in the underneath paragraphs. To commence with, there are numerous reasons why it is essential to be ambitious for a person. First and foremost, everyone having ambition will have strong motivation and passion to achieve desired goal because of this, they mainly concentrate on hard work whether they are able to achieve it or not. For instance, individuals try to obtain their target may fail several time, but if they continue to work hard, there will be more chances to succeed. Furthermore, it is a negative feature as people fail to achieve their predetermined goals, they feel tensed and tired even though they start to ignore their small daily happiness. Due to this, they prone to diseases and some of them commit sucide in rare cases. In conclusion, it can be said that ambitious persons can achieve any goal by doing hard work, individuals unable to obtain aims might also commit sucide.

A This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
 amount of individuals Possible agreement error. Did you mean “tends”? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so ‘tend’ is not always incorrect.)tends
tend
 to believe that ambition is a necessity trait. It is crucial for a person to be ambitious. I believe that it is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
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characteristic and
 it will be Possible spelling mistake found.explicated
explicited
 in the underneath paragraphs.

To commence with, there are numerous reasons why it is essential to be ambitious for a person. First
 and foremost, everyone having ambition will have strong motivation and passion to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconcludebring aboutwinmanageobtainattain
achieve
 desired goal because of this
, they mainly
 concentrate on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work whether they are able to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconcludebring aboutwinmanageobtainattain
achieve
 it or not. For instance
, individuals try to obtain their target may fail Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: “several times”.several times
several time
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if they continue to work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
, there will be more chances to succeed.

Furthermore
, it is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 feature as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 fail to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconcludebring aboutwinmanageobtainattain
achieve
 their predetermined goals, they feel tensed and tired even though
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglect
ignore
 their This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 daily happiness. Due to this, they prone to diseases and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them commit Possible spelling mistake found.suicide
sucide
 in rare cases.

In conclusion
, it can be said
 that ambitious persons can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconcludebring aboutwinmanageobtainattain
achieve
 any goal by doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work, individuals unable to obtain aims might also
 commit Possible spelling mistake found.suicide
sucide
. 