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Problems with environment pollution have become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems. Suggest posiible solutions and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experienc.

Over the past years there had been an endless issue on how to we can protect our mother nature. All over the world each countries are making an effort to halt the causes affecting our environment from deterioration. In my view, there are various and feasible ways to overcome and beat the battle of worldwide pollution. To name some are we can focus on waste management as well as what causing air pollution. The first major culprit in these issue is the mass throwing of our waste and garbage anywhere. People nowadays are simply reluctant on throwing waste everywhere. One solution to this attitude is to educate people on how to segregate their wastes into four parts. For example, the local government can apply a campaign on waste management. Moreover, they will set up a four bins of garbage bags with color and labels like papers, bottles, plastics and others. Providing this the community should follow the rules of segregation. With this simple way of awareness and application we can make a small effort on the environment issue. Another problem that giving a harmful effect on our society is the air pollution. To give one example that causes an air pollution is the gas emission coming from the huge numbers of cars. One solution to this is to limit the usage of cars on the road. For instance, the cars ending in even numbers can use only on Monday, Wednesday, and Friday while ending on odd numbers will be on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday only. In this way we can limit the numbers of cars, so the emission on gas will be less as well. In conclusion, the fact that environment pollution are widely spread all over the world. Their are various and varied options to solve these problems. If the community will follow the rules of the government and apply on their everyday life these problem will conquered.
Over the past years there had been an endless issue on how to we can protect our mother nature. All over the world each
The noun should probably be in the singular form: “country”?
countries
are making an effort to halt the causes affecting our environment from deterioration. In my view, there are various and feasible ways to overcome and beat the battle of worldwide
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pollution
. To name
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some
are we can focus on
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waste
management
as well
as what causing air pollution.

The
first
major culprit in these issue is the mass throwing of our
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waste
and garbage anywhere.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
nowadays are
simply
reluctant on throwing
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waste
everywhere. One solution to this attitude is to educate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
on how to segregate their
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wastes
into four parts.
For example
, the local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can apply a campaign on
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waste
management.
Moreover
, they will set up a four bins of garbage bags with color and labels like papers, bottles, plastics
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
and others
. Providing this the community should follow the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
of segregation. With this simple way of awareness and application we can
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make
a
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small
effort on the environment issue.

Another problem that giving a harmful effect on our society is the air
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pollution
. To give one example that causes an air
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pollution
is the gas emission coming from the huge
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numbers
of
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cars
. One solution to this is to limit the usage of
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cars
on the road.
For instance
, the
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cars
ending in even
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numbers
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
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only
on Monday, Wednesday, and Friday while ending on odd
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numbers
will be on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
. In this way we can limit the
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numbers
of
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cars
,
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so
the emission on gas will be less
Comparison requires “than”, not ‘then’ nor ‘as’.
as
well.

In conclusion
, the fact that environment
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pollution
are
widely
spread all over the world.
Did you mean “there”?
Their
are various and varied options to solve these problems. If the community
Consider removing ‘will’. (Usually, ‘will’ does not occur in a conditional clause, unless in the sense ‘want to’ or ‘be willing to’.)
will follow
the
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rules
of the
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government
and apply on their everyday life
‘These’ does not seem to match the singular noun ‘problem’. Did you mean “this problem” or “these problems”?
these problem
will
The modal verb ‘will’ requires the verb’s base form.
conquered
.
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IELTS essay Problems with environment pollution have become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems. Suggest posiible solutions and give your own opinion.

Essay
  American English
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319 words
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