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Some think environmental problem should be solved on a global scale, while others believe i is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some think environmental problem should be solved on a global scale, while others believe i is better to deal with them nationally. NY7W
Many regard environmental challenges as the issue to be dealt with globally, while some see them as challenges to be solved separately within one’s own nations. In my opinion, international cooperation underpins the success in overcoming environmental problems: the issue should be brought onto the global stage. On one hand, having the problem managed locally can be more effective. Since most challenges are shaped by the economic, social, and natural landscape of the particular nation, local government can easier write policies which address holistic problem of its country and citizens. Some country rely excessively on the production section, and in return pay a huge environmental toll. Others might suffer from overpopulation, which forces urban expansion, folded by loss of the country’s green area. These two conditions, indeed, required distinct solution. One the other hand, with environmental issues be discussed globally, issues affecting plural countries can be solved with a lessen political tension. Take into account of the issue of Mea Kong River: Laos, Thailand and Myanmar faced drought due to a China’s damn construction which hinder the water passage. The problem can never be solved by a single country. Moreover, issues such as climate change and carbon dioxide level impact not only the polluter countries but the whole world. To halt the rising world temperature and reduce greenhouse gases emission, all countries must set a mutual goal. Many international agreement have already been made regarding environmental issues: Paris Agreement, Kyoto Protocol, Convention on Biodiversity. Finally, I believe environmental issues are internationally relate, and should be solved on a global scale. Although many problems are thought to affect only the locals, thus being managed with out international dialogue, they turned out to pose a global threat. The examples are pollution problem in South East Asia region, Covid-19 pandemic and a broader topic of climate change. In conclusion, solving environmental problem required assistance from multiple countries. A country alone can solve minor problems on its own, however it can not deal with global issues.
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challenges as the
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nations. In my opinion, international cooperation underpins the success in overcoming
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environmental
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problems
: the
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should
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onto the
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global
stage.

On one hand, having the
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managed
locally
can be more effective. Since most challenges
are shaped
by the economic, social, and natural landscape of the particular nation, local
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government
can easier write policies which address holistic
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problem
of its
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country
and citizens.
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rely
excessively
on the production section, and in return pay a huge
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toll. Others might suffer from overpopulation, which forces urban expansion, folded by loss of the
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country’s
green area. These two conditions,
indeed
, required distinct solution.

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the other hand, with
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environmental
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be discussed
globally,
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affecting plural
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solved
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political tension. Take into account of the
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Kong River: Laos, Thailand and Myanmar faced drought due to a China’s damn construction which hinder the water passage. The
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can never be
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by a single country.

Moreover
,
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issues
such as climate
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change
and carbon dioxide level impact not
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only
the polluter
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countries
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the whole world. To halt the rising world temperature and
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greenhouse gases emission, all
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countries
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must
set a mutual goal.
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international agreement have already
been made
regarding
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environmental
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issues
: Paris Agreement, Kyoto Protocol, Convention on Biodiversity.

Finally
, I believe
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environmental
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are
internationally
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on a
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scale. Although
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to affect
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only
the locals,
thus
being managed
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international dialogue, they turned out to pose a
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global
threat. The examples are pollution
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problem
in South East Asia region, Covid-19 pandemic and a broader topic of climate
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change
.

In conclusion
, solving
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environmental
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problem
required assistance from multiple
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countries
. A
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country
alone can solve minor
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problems
on its
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own
,
however
it can not deal with
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global
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issues
.
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IELTS essay Some think environmental problem should be solved on a global scale, while others believe i is better to deal with them nationally.

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