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some teachers believe they have to be very strict with students

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Teachers are the pillar of strength, and the guiding force in a student’s life. Teachers pass on values to children, prepare them for further education, and are the main contributor to good education in a society. Students are deeply affected by teachers' love and affection, character and competence. Teachers should have a balance between being an authority and a friend with their students. While it is important that the students know the teacher is leading the class, teachers should also understand that the pupils have other subjects that they have to study and that maybe they have other problems outside of school. Teachers should make school a safe space for their student since they spend most of their day there. Threatening the students with bad grades it’s not a good teaching method since the children will most likely not enjoy the subject. Also, teachers should understand that students focus mostly on the subjects that will help them in the future, so they will prioritize some over the others. In conclusion, every educator will have a different approach on teaching, but neither extreme is good and there should be a balance between strictness and tolerance.
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Teachers
are the pillar of strength, and the guiding force in a
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student’s
life.
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Teachers
pass on values to children, prepare them for
further
education, and are the main contributor to
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good
education in a society.
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Students
are
deeply
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affected
by teachers'
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love
and affection, character and competence.

Teachers should have a balance between being an authority and a friend with their
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students
. While it is
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important
that the
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students
know the
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teacher
is leading the
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class
,
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teachers
should
also
understand that the pupils have other subjects that they
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study and that maybe they have other problems outside of school.

Teachers should
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make
school a safe space for their
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student
since they spend most of their day there. Threatening the
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students
with
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bad
grades it’s not a
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good
teaching method since the children will most likely not enjoy the subject.
Also
,
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teachers
should understand that
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students
focus
mostly
on the subjects that will
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help
them in the future,
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so
they will prioritize
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some
over the others.

In conclusion
, every educator will have a
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different
approach on teaching,
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but
neither extreme is
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good
and there should be a balance between strictness and tolerance.

IELTS essay some teachers believe they have to be very strict with students

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