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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 85a2B
There is a consensus of expert opinion that cricket may have been invented during Saxon or Norman times by children living in the Weald, an area of dense woodlands and clearings in south-east England. The first reference to cricket being played as an adult sport was in 1611, and in the same year, a dictionary defined cricket as a boys' game. There is also the thought that cricket may have derived from bowls, by the intervention of a batsman trying to stop the ball from reaching its target by hitting it away. Village cricket had developed by the middle of the 17th century and the first English “county teams” were formed in the second half of the century, as “local experts” from village cricket were employed as the earliest professionals. The first known game in which the teams use county names is in 1709. Early village cricket Early village cricket In the first half of the 18th Century cricket established itself as a leading sport in London and the south-eastern counties of England. Its spread was limited by the constraints of travel, but it was slowly gaining popularity in other parts of England and Women’s Cricket dates back to the 1745, when the first known match was played in Surrey. In 1744, the first Laws of Cricket were written and subsequently amended in 1774, when innovations such as lbw, a 3rd stump, - the middle stump and a maximum bat width were added. The codes were drawn up by the “Star and Garter Club” whose members ultimately founded the famous Marylebone Cricket Club at Lord's in 1787. MCC immediately became the custodian of the Laws and has made revisions ever since then to the current day.
There is a consensus of expert opinion that
cricket
may have
been invented
during Saxon or Norman times by children living in the
Weald
, an area of dense woodlands and clearings in south-east England. The
first
reference to
cricket
being played
as an adult sport was in 1611, and in the same year, a dictionary defined
cricket
as a boys' game. There is
also
the
thought
that
cricket
may have derived from bowls, by the intervention of a batsman trying to
stop
the ball from reaching its target by hitting it away.

Village
cricket
had developed by the middle of the 17th century and the
first
English “county teams”
were formed
in the second half of the century, as “local experts” from village
cricket
were employed
as the earliest professionals. The
first
known game in which the teams
use
county names is in 1709.

Early village cricket

Early village cricket

In the
first
half of the 18th Century
cricket
established itself as a leading sport in London and the south-eastern counties of England. Its spread
was limited
by the constraints of travel,
but
it was
slowly
gaining popularity in other parts of England and Women’s
Cricket
dates back to the 1745, when the
first
known match
was played
in Surrey.

In 1744, the
first
Laws of
Cricket
were written
and
subsequently
amended in 1774, when innovations such as lbw, a 3rd stump,
-
the middle stump and a maximum bat width were
added
. The codes
were drawn
up by the “Star and Garter Club” whose members
ultimately
founded the
famous
Marylebone
Cricket
Club at Lord's in 1787. MCC immediately became the custodian of the Laws and has made revisions ever since then to the
current
day.
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IELTS essay Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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