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Children are generally successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree?

Children are generally successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus it is better to learn languages in childhood. xm2QQ
It is considered that children have more ability to learn new languages than adults, so it is more advantageous to learn these new skills in the childhood period. I agree with this notion due to their learning age and less stress regarding the future. To commence with the view of agreement that children can learn international language because their brain is still in a growth phase. To elaborate it, kinder have the ability to learn quickly and they can adapt new skills in less time including speaking a language. They also have the motivation and confidence to study valuable things. Now, for instance, World Health Organisation (WHO) during their research found that the mind capability for children's mind can grasp more knowledge conveniently as compared to adults. Thus, learning a foreign language is easier for children because they are in their learning process. Further strengthening the view that children do not have much burden on their mind due to which they are flexible to study a novel language. To explicate it, in schools, teachers don't pressurize students for their studies. That is why children are free from any kind of stress and have more quality time to learn something unique such as a new language which also provides them career options. To epitome, a survey was conducted by TNDC found that children who learned a new language in their primary school got more work opportunities. Therefore, by studying foreign languages, children can brighten their future. In conclusion, it is clear that the pupils with knowledge of any foreign language are better performers because of the enhanced capability to learn and understand others.
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languages
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in the childhood period. I
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with this notion due to their learning age and less
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stress
regarding the future.

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children
can
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learn
international
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language
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because
their brain is
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in a growth phase. To elaborate it, kinder have the ability to
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learn
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quickly and
they can adapt
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new
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skills
in less time including speaking a
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language
. They
also
have the motivation and confidence to study valuable things.
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Now
,
for instance
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Organisation
(WHO) during their research found that the mind capability for children's mind can grasp more knowledge
conveniently
as compared to adults.
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, learning a foreign
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language
is easier for
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children
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because
they are in their learning process.

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Further
strengthening the view that
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children
do not have much burden on their mind due to which they are flexible to study a novel
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language
. To explicate it, in schools, teachers don't pressurize students for their studies.
That is
why
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children
are free from any kind of
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stress
and have more quality time to
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learn
something unique such as a
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new
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language
which
also
provides them career options. To epitome, a survey
was conducted
by
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TNDC
found that
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children
who learned a
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new
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language
in their primary school
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got
more work opportunities.
Therefore
, by studying foreign
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languages
,
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children
can brighten their future.

In conclusion
, it is
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clear
that the pupils with knowledge of any foreign
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language
are better performers
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because
of the enhanced capability to
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learn
and understand others.
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IELTS essay Children are generally successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus it is better to learn languages in childhood.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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