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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it's a bad idea and could be dangerous. Discuss both these sides and give your opinion. v.4

Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it's a bad idea and could be dangerous. v. 4
The scientific community has largely been divided over the notion of sending messages to extra-terrestrial creatures. While some are of the opinion that we need to contact these intellectual outer space creatures, others believe that, such an attempt could be disastrous. In my opinion, we should try to communicate with other life forms, because it will help us in making more discoveries. This essay will discuss both these views. Contacting extra-terrestrial creatures will be extremely beneficial to the field of space research because, despite the technological advances, our knowledge about the conditions on other planets is limited. In other words, communicating with the other inhabitants of our galaxy will aid us in unravelling a lot of mysteries. For example, a recent report published by NASA claimed that information about the existence of other life forms will be the key in deciding if other planets will be suitable to be inhabited by humans. Hence, I believe that it is vital to contact these beings. On the other hand, some people strongly condemn the concept of trying to contact extra-terrestrial creatures. According to them, the attempt to communicate with these beings can be hazardous. For instance, our research about the intellect and the existence of these life forms are limited, thus, there are significant odds that, contacting them may lead to a provoked attack. Since, most of our theories are allegations, some argue that trying to communicate with aliens will be a reckless approach. Though, I believe that attempts should be made to establish communication with other creatures inhabiting space, it only makes sense to proceed with it, with enough evidence and caution. In conclusion, although the opinions about communicating with other space creatures vary greatly, I think that we should contact them, as it will fill a lot of lacunae in our definition of space. However, enough caution should be taken, accordingly. In the future, the field of space research will be redefined.
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over the notion of sending messages to extra-terrestrial
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creatures
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some
are of the opinion that we need to
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contact
these intellectual outer
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space
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, others believe that, such an attempt could be disastrous. In my opinion, we should try to communicate with
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other
life forms,
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because
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help
us in making more discoveries. This essay will discuss both these views.

Contacting extra-terrestrial
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creatures
will be
extremely
beneficial to the field of
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space
research
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because
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other
planets
is limited
. In
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words, communicating with the
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other
inhabitants of our galaxy will aid us in
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unravelling
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a lot of
mysteries.
For example
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other
life forms will be the key in deciding if
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other
planets will be suitable to
be inhabited
by humans.
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, I believe that it is vital to
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contact
these beings.

On the
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hand,
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some
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people
strongly
condemn the concept of trying to
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contact
extra-terrestrial
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creatures
. According to them, the attempt to communicate with these beings can be hazardous.
For instance
, our research about the intellect and the existence of these life forms
are limited
,
thus
, there are significant odds that, contacting them may lead to a provoked attack. Since, most of our theories are allegations,
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some
argue that trying to communicate with aliens will be a reckless approach. Though, I believe that attempts should
be made
to establish communication with
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other
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creatures
inhabiting
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space
, it
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only
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makes
sense to proceed with it, with
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enough
evidence and caution.

In conclusion
, although the opinions about communicating with
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other
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space
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creatures
vary
greatly
, I
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think
that we should
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contact
them, as it will fill
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a lot of
lacunae in our definition of
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space
.
However
,
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enough
caution should
be taken
,
accordingly
. In the future, the field of
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space
research will
be redefined
.
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it's a bad idea and could be dangerous. v. 4

Essay
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4 paragraphs
322 words
8.5
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