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Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. with this statement? kOw8
Nowadays, artificial intelligence has taken over the world that most of the jobs has become human free and robots are controlling the everything, it is because the technology has advanced to such huge extent, some people believe that artificial intelligence will supersede human intelligence in near time, while other believe that natural intelligence cannot be taken over anyways. This essay is written to believe that human intellect will always be greater than other man-made technologies. To begin with, computers do not contain natural intelligence they are artificially driven and manmade, therefore, no matter how much they are advanced through technology, computers cannot supersede human intelligence. For example, the famous scientist made a robot which can perform basic house chores, but it was designed to work on certain areas such as house, offices etc. and malfunctioned when used on different platform like industries, factories, poolside etc. for same work. On other hand, These thinking machines are a manmade miracle, astonishingly it can perform each task required or ordered to it. they are like a copy of human brain, recently a human-like robot named Sophia was introduced to the world which to our surprise can mimic human emotions and expressions and one cannot simply tell if its real or fake person unless focused. In conclusion, the artificial machines are achievement human have ever made in technological grounds, it has turned lives upside down, however, it cannot compete with human's brainpower because natural minds are creation which is still very little explored while artificial skill is a creation which is only limited to the known skill of man.
Nowadays, artificial
intelligence
has taken over the world that most of the jobs has become
human
free and robots are controlling
the everything
, it is
because
the technology has advanced to such huge extent,
some
people
believe that artificial
intelligence
will supersede
human
intelligence
in near time, while other believe that natural
intelligence
cannot
be taken
over anyways. This essay
is written
to believe that
human
intellect will always be greater than other
man
-made technologies.

To
begin
with, computers do not contain natural
intelligence
they are
artificially
driven and
manmade
,
therefore
, no matter how much they
are advanced
through technology, computers cannot supersede
human
intelligence
.
For example
, the
famous
scientist made a robot which can perform basic
house
chores,
but
it
was designed
to work on certain areas such as
house
, offices etc. and malfunctioned when
used
on
different
platform like industries, factories, poolside etc. for same work.

On other hand, These thinking machines are a
manmade
miracle,
astonishingly
it can perform each task required or ordered to it. they are like a copy of
human
brain, recently a human-like robot named Sophia
was introduced
to the world which to our surprise can mimic
human
emotions and expressions and one cannot
simply
tell
if its real or fake person unless focused.

In conclusion
, the artificial machines are achievement
human
have ever made in technological grounds, it has turned
lives
upside down,
however
, it cannot compete with human's brainpower
because
natural minds are creation which is
still
very
little
explored while artificial
skill
is a creation which is
only
limited to the known
skill
of
man
.
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IELTS essay Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. with this statement?

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265 words
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