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Some says that we should use traditional methods to solve our problems and others say we should use modern methods. What is your opinion?

Some says that we should use traditional methods to solve our problems and others say we should use modern methods. What is your opinion? kW7Pe

To me, modern methods should be used to solve our problems because we have to move with time. Sticking on to traditional methods is not a good choice. It usually involves seeking some kind of advice from our elders and going with their choice. We have to find a solution by our own. We have to solve our problems by ourselves. That is what nowadays demands for. It is important for ourselves to be independent in the society. When we solve problems using modern methods we are making ourselves more adaptable. They are inevitable too.

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move
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 we solve problems using modern methods we are making ourselves more adaptable. They are inevitable too. 