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Some say all offenders should be sent to prison, other argue that there are better alternatives such as community work for those who commit minor crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some say all offenders should be sent to prison, other argue that there are better alternatives such as community work for those who commit minor crimes. Kw316
Abating crime activities like robbery, sexual harrassment, murder, rapes seems far cry for today's world. Some proportion of folk claim that the idea of sending culprits behind prisons culprits for all types of crime deserves appreciation. Others, however, assert that assigning community work as a punishment for minor crimes seems more worthwhile than imprisionment. This essay will account for both sides with my perception. Numerous points endorse to former statement. First and foremost, sentencing to imprisonment is prodigious than other ways to create fear in mind of criminals towards c. . .
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. This essay will account for both sides with my perception.

Numerous points endorse to former statement.
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and foremost, sentencing to imprisonment is
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prodigious
than other ways to create fear in mind of criminals towards c.
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IELTS essay Some say all offenders should be sent to prison, other argue that there are better alternatives such as community work for those who commit minor crimes.

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2 paragraphs
92 words
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