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Many people con of choose to study at university in another country What kind of problems do you think they would encounter and what are the positive aspects of a decision like this Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your

Many people con of choose to study at university in another country What kind of problems do you think they would encounter and what are the positive aspects of a decision like this Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your 7a0BY
Many people select to study at university has all diverse streams. This variation may not be available in their home country or it may not be available in their home country or it may not be available in their home country or it may not be of the same standard as university overseas. That is the reason people choose to go to abroad for the higher studies. When people go to another country, they come across different culture all together. As they stay away from home and family. Sometimes they feel home sick. Adjusting to new environment of different country is not easy for them without fami. . .
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select to study at university has all diverse streams. This variation may not be available in their home
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country
or it may not be available in their home
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country
or it may not be available in their home
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
or it may not be of the same standard as university overseas.
That is
the reason
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people
choose to
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go to abroad
for the higher studies.

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go to another
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, they
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come
across
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culture all together. As they stay away from home and family.
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Sometimes
they feel home sick. Adjusting to new environment of
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different
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is not easy for them without
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IELTS essay Many people con of choose to study at university in another country What kind of problems do you think they would encounter and what are the positive aspects of a decision like this Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your

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  American English
2 paragraphs
109 words
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