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" success means the desire was strong enough". To what extend do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer?

" success means the desire was strong enough" . 0AaDQ
Human aspiration to be at the zenith of success is sky rocketing in this modern world. Presently, given statement claims that less strong desire is supposed to be responsible factor behind failure. Undeniably, desire is one of the great moving force to lead someone to his destiny. However, some other factors are more cosiderable for success. Here, I would like to discord with given statement. There are manifold points to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, perfect planning to achieve target, hard work with positive attitude are most significant to accomplish success. For instance, . . .
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for success. Here, I would like to discord with
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hard
work with
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positive
attitude are most significant to accomplish success.
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IELTS essay " success means the desire was strong enough" .

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
99 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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