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Some problems of first-year students in their study

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There are a lot of problems for the 1st-year students, especially in their studies. The 1st challenge freshmen face is having too much fun and no time for studying, or it can be said that they lack time management skills. Staying away from the home for the 1st time, students will have the opportunity to live freely and comfortably. As the result, they end up with poor grades, missed deadlines and they will not be able to pass the exams with the expected score. The second challenge that is equally important is the workload. Many students are not prepared for the academic workload at college so they can not keep up with the lectures in class and difficult to finish their homework in the best way. In conclusion, 1st-year college students may find it complicated to make a successful transition into college life.

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