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Most contemporary, the issue of the advertisement has become highly controversial in modern society. Whereas a common opinion is that advertisement is the best way to persuade consumers to buy things. Others think that advertisement isn’t practical so not long to pay attention to it.

Most contemporary, the issue of the advertisement has become highly controversial in modern society. Whereas a common opinion is that advertisement is the best way to persuade consumers to buy things. Others think that advertisement isn’t practical so not long to pay attention to it. AJ00M
Most contemporary, the issue of the advertisement has become highly controversial in modern society. Whereas a common opinion is that advertisement is the best way to persuade consumers to buy things. Others think that advertisement isn’t practical so not long to pay attention to it. In this essay, I will attempt to look into critical features and provide my overall opinion. Generally speaking, there is a wide range of reasons people think that Innovation can’t approach people wisely because the campaign is the key to business spreading. We are not used to buying an unrecognized branded product. But advertisement introduces the key features attract to people. Sometimes advertisements keep the data in our unconscious minds. For instance, When we get bought something. We accept the recognized product. We are used to shopping for a reliable and preferable destination. Moreover, a further point is in favor of, Technology and preferences are upgrading every moment. Manufacturers are investing their time to implement new innovative services and products. How do you get to know about them? The simple solution is an advertisement helps us to know about products then assist us in purchasing suitable products. Besides, Our cravings never come out outside without making any demand. Advertisment also support us compared to other products, actually features, which do we need. The reason makes a competitive market and diminishing monopoly business policy. Despite these arguments, A case can be an idea that Advertisements sometimes promote fake information, which is used for attracting people and then disappointing consumers. Moreover TV, electronic media are using many promotional purposes because it’s one of the ways to a mass number of people to reach them. However, aggrandize and rapid ad most of the case, viewers sometimes s get annoying experience. And same product multiple promotions people aren’t able to keep their mind. As a result, they are passing through a perplexity condition. In a nutshell, the issue of advertisement is widespread issue in modern times and has no easy solution for this. having considered both sides of issues. Advertisement has many negative effect and so on. outweigh these lousy sides, I think advertisement gives many optimal options. If promotion production houses promote moderate, suitable advertiment. Then it can not be ignorable to all.
Most contemporary, the
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of the
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highly
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advertisement
is the best way to persuade consumers to
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things. Others
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that
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isn’t practical
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not long to pay attention to it. In this essay, I will attempt to look into critical features and provide my
overall
opinion.

Generally
speaking, there is a wide range of reasons
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people
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think
that Innovation can’t approach
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people
wisely
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because
the campaign is the key to business spreading. We are not
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used
to buying an unrecognized branded
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product
.
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But
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advertisement
introduces the key features attract to
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people
.
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Sometimes
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advertisements
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keep
the data in our unconscious minds.
For instance
, When we
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get
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bought
something. We accept the recognized
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product
. We are
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used
to shopping for a reliable and preferable destination.

Moreover
, a
further
point is in favor of, Technology and preferences are upgrading every moment. Manufacturers are investing their time to implement new innovative services and
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products
. How do you
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get
to know about them? The simple solution is an
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advertisement
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helps
us to know about
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products
then assist us in purchasing suitable
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products
.
Besides
, Our cravings never
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come
out outside without making any demand.
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Advertisment
also
support us compared to other
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products
, actually features, which do we need. The reason
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makes
a competitive market and diminishing monopoly business policy.

Despite these arguments, A case can be an
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idea
that
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Advertisements
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sometimes
promote fake information, which is
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used
for attracting
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people
and then disappointing consumers.
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Moreover
TV, electronic media are using
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many
promotional purposes
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because
it’s one of the ways to a mass number of
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people
to reach them.
However
, aggrandize and rapid ad most of the case, viewers
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sometimes
s
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get
annoying experience. And same
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product
multiple promotions
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people
aren’t able to
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keep
their mind.
As a result
, they are passing through a perplexity condition.

In a nutshell, the
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issue
of
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advertisement
is widespread
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in modern times and has no easy solution for this.
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having
considered both sides of
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issues
.
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has
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many
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negative
effect and
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so
on. outweigh these lousy sides, I
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think
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advertisement
gives
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many
optimal options. If promotion production
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houses
promote moderate, suitable
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advertiment
. Then it can not be ignorable to all.
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IELTS essay Most contemporary, the issue of the advertisement has become highly controversial in modern society. Whereas a common opinion is that advertisement is the best way to persuade consumers to buy things. Others think that advertisement isn’t practical so not long to pay attention to it.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
375 words
6.0
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