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Some people use the internet to search for solutions to their medical problems.is it positive or negative development?give your own opinion and example from your experience.

Some people use the internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. is it positive or negative development? give your own opinion and example from your experience. 9ej7
Nowadays, due to the development in technology some people look for medical instructions on the internet to cure their diseases or illnesses themselves without visiting a doctor. Some medical problems might be seriously dangerous for health and also different diseases with similar symptoms might not be diagnosed easily by ordinary people. From my point of view or I believe, searching on the internet definitely is not a safe way to find remedy. All of us, have experienced simple illnesses such as flu in our lives that we could get better by using some kinds of vitamins and having rest. On the other hand, there are some diseases which are more problematic. Not only we cannot cure them ourselves at home, but also it is needed to be experimented by a specialist. If not it can lead to more serious problems. For instance, a simple infection in a part of body can transfer to blood if the affected person does not get proper medicine in the right time. Moreover, there are various illnesses which have similar symptoms. In such a situation, only specialists have the ability to diagnose the exact type of the disease. Diagnosis has always been important in medical problems. Because incorrect medicine might lead to inevitable consequences and make the situation worse. In conclusion, I believe medical problems should be taken seriously and the best way to find a cure or remedy is to consult with a doctor. The danger for health and similarities in symptoms of different illnesses convince me not to take risk when I face a disease.
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instructions on the internet to cure their
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illnesses
themselves without visiting a doctor.
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problems
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dangerous
for health and
also
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diseases
with similar symptoms might not
be diagnosed
easily
by ordinary
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people
. From my point of view or I believe, searching on the internet definitely is not a safe way to find remedy. All of us, have experienced simple
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illnesses
such as flu in our
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lives
that we could
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get
better by using
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kinds of vitamins and having rest.
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, there are
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diseases
which are more problematic. Not
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we cannot cure them ourselves at home,
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is needed
to
be experimented
by a specialist.
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person does not
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get
proper medicine in the right time.

Moreover
, there are various
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illnesses
which have similar symptoms. In such a situation,
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only
specialists have the ability to diagnose the exact type of the
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disease
. Diagnosis has always been
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.
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incorrect medicine might lead to inevitable consequences and
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make
the situation worse.

In conclusion
, I believe
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medical
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problems
should
be taken
seriously
and the best way to find a cure or remedy is to consult with a doctor. The
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danger
for health and similarities in symptoms of
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different
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illnesses
convince me not to take
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when I face a
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.
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IELTS essay Some people use the internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. is it positive or negative development? give your own opinion and example from your experience.

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