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Some people thinks that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people thinks it is bad. Discuss both these views and state your opinion.

Some people thinks that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people thinks it is bad. bLkX
Nowadays, several country organized international sports events between their team and foreign team. This type of program raised question sometimes that, arrangements of intern-country athletic events is better, while others are totally opposed these events. Now let us consider arguments for and against these views. On one hand, various athletic organizations believes that country should organize international athletic tournaments. They believe that, this types of event could help our athletic players to understand playing methods of foreign players and possibly they acquire a number of more knowledge on their particular sports field. For instance, Indian Cricket teams have not any idea how to playing with better strategy under pressure, while Australian Players knows the playing methods under pressure. If Indian Cricket board hosting a tournament between Indian team and Australian team, our players can developed proper playing strategies whenever high score is necessary for win the match. from another perspective, few people are believe that organizing an international athletic event is not good for country. They think, when our sports communities hosted such kind of events it required to additional funding from our national budgets and maybe it leads to the unwanted expenditures. For instance, Mumbai sports club organized an international football tournament for Indian players and Spanish players. At this time our sports community must arrange a good Hotels and their special food for foreign players, moreover we require a trophy with a number of reward money if they win the match. In essence, an international sports events is good for our sports communities to developing their knowledge in their particular field of sports however, we also required further funding from government to organized such kind of arrangement. If I were to choose one of them, then I think it is worth to organized international athletic tournaments.
Nowadays, several country
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international
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events
between their
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team
and foreign
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team
. This type of program raised question
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sometimes
that, arrangements of intern-country
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athletic
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events
is better, while others are
totally
opposed these
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events
.
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Now
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let
us consider arguments for and against these views.

On one hand, various
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athletic
organizations believes that country should organize
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international
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athletic
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tournaments
. They believe that, this types of
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event
could
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help
our
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athletic
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players
to understand
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playing
methods of foreign
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players
and
possibly
they acquire a number of more knowledge on their particular
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sports
field.
For instance
, Indian Cricket
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teams
have not any
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idea
how to
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playing
with better strategy under pressure, while Australian
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Players
knows the
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playing
methods under pressure. If Indian Cricket board hosting a
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tournament
between Indian
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team
and Australian
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team
, our
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players
can developed proper
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playing
strategies whenever high score is necessary for win the match.

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from
another perspective, few
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people
are believe that organizing an
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international
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athletic
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event
is not
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good
for country. They
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think
, when our
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sports
communities hosted such kind of
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events
it required to additional funding from our national budgets and maybe it leads to the unwanted expenditures.
For instance
, Mumbai
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sports
club
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organized
an
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international
football
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tournament
for Indian
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players
and Spanish
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players
. At this time our
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sports
community
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must
arrange a
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good
Hotels and their special food for foreign
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players
,
moreover
we require a trophy with a number of reward money if they win the match.

In essence, an
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international
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sports
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events
is
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good
for our
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sports
communities to developing their knowledge in their particular field of
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sports
however
, we
also
required
further
funding from
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government
to
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organized
such kind of arrangement. If I were to choose one of them, then I
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think
it is worth to
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organized
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international
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athletic
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tournaments
.
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IELTS essay Some people thinks that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people thinks it is bad.

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