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Some people thinks that children should follow their parents’ rule and regulation. Other argue that It is not good ideas for life of them in futures. Do you agree or disagree with it?

Some people thinks that children should follow their parents’ rule and regulation. Other argue that It is not good ideas for life of them in futures. with it? jR961
Nowadays, rule has been playing more paramount part than other like behavior for becoming successful person in life. Society reckon that children ought to obey their rules, which has been set by their parents. However, other defuse with it is not a good enough to reliable on them for their whole life. I fully agree with given statement. To embark with, children have to strictly keep in their mind rules of parents in entire life. Parents’ have to enough experiment to how to survive in life. Till now, they have been live very peacefully, so as a result, they can give numerous examples and ideas to beat lives questions and hard part. Moreover, whenever, juveniles wrap in difficulty mode, so their caretaker would definitely help them to out. Notwithstanding, children think that parents are outdated, they have extremely good though to compete. For instance, in accordance with CCA – Child Care Association, they said that those who blindly stick with perspective of their elderly person, they have succeeded in their life. Furthermore, parents are perfect role model for rest of following life. In order to get lavish life, they need to accept rule or point of views. some individuals who have never come up ideas, they got negative results, nonetheless, those who stuck with orthodox they have gotten better consequence. First time, although, child never adapt new rule of their parents, in course of time, they would realize that how it would fruitful for them. Likewise, parents also got failure, so they can teach to adults. To exemplify, according to Hindu News, almost 85% scholar got best decision for completing 12th grade, that means, what is the best career line is appropriate for them. To recapitulate, I strongly consider parents as a good mentor in our life for taking risk as well as some tasks. As long as get accomplish our life in such proper manner, they are sine-qua-non in each step.
Nowadays,
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. Society
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that children ought to obey their
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, which has
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. I
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strictly
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keep
in their mind
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rules
of
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parents
in entire
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life
.
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have to
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experiment to how to survive in
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now
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peacefully
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as a result
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questions and
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their caretaker would definitely
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them to out. Notwithstanding, children
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that
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parents
are outdated
, they have
extremely
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though to compete.
For instance
, in accordance with CCA
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Child Care Association, they said that those who
blindly
stick with perspective of their elderly person, they have succeeded in their life.

Furthermore
,
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parents
are perfect role model for rest of following
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life
. In order to
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get
lavish
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life
, they need to accept
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rule
or point of views.
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some
individuals who have never
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come
up
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ideas
, they
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got
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negative
results, nonetheless, those who stuck with orthodox they have gotten better consequence.
First
time, although, child never adapt new
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rule
of their
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parents
, in course of time, they would realize that how it would fruitful for them.
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,
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parents
also
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got
failure,
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so
they can teach to adults. To exemplify, according to Hindu News, almost 85% scholar
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got best
decision for completing 12th grade, that means, what is the best career line is appropriate for them.

To recapitulate, I
strongly
consider
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parents
as a
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good
mentor in our
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life
for taking
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risk
as well
as
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some
tasks. As long as
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get
accomplish our
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life
in such proper manner, they are sine-qua-non in each step.
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IELTS essay Some people thinks that children should follow their parents’ rule and regulation. Other argue that It is not good ideas for life of them in futures. with it?

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322 words
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