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Some people think visitors to others countries should imitate local customs and behaviours. Some people disagree;they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Some people think visitors to others countries should imitate local customs and behaviours. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both the views and give your opinion 8OEr

When the question regarding visitors is discussed, there are divided opinions. Where some believe that when out-of-towners visit another nations, they should follow the tradition action and attitude. However; another group of thinkers support that the hosting country would allow the distinct cultural people to travel. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the sides would be discussed.

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 commenting on my decision, both the sides would be discussed
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IELTS essay Some people think visitors to others countries should imitate local customs and behaviours. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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