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Some people think visitors to others countries should imitate local customs and behaviours. Some people disagree;they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Some people think visitors to others countries should imitate local customs and behaviours. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both the views and give your opinion 8OEr

When the question regarding visitors is discussed, there are divided opinions. Where some believe that when out-of-towners visit another nations, they should follow the tradition action and attitude. However; another group of thinkers support that the hosting country would allow the distinct cultural people to travel. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the sides would be discussed.

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, there are divided
 opinions. Where This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 believe that when Possible spelling mistake found.
out-of-towners
 visit another nations, they should follow the tradition action and attitude. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
; another group of thinkers support that the hosting country would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 the distinct cultural This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to travel. Therefore
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 commenting on my decision, both the sides would be discussed
. 