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Some people think University e education should be exceed accessedwhy every single person and government should make free of cost to what extent do you agree or disagree

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In cutting- edge -era, education is a hugely increasing David a few individuals think college education should be accessed xby each and every one human as well as government should assemble free of cost I agree with this statement up to large extent the following essay will discuss it in forthcoming paragraph. video to begin with government showed admission in university will be easy for every person because with the help of University human beings can obtain a plethora of knowledge related to any subject in addition to in modern time folksare interested in various kind of supreme like some mankind interested in medical team oscommerce and so on if people gained much knowledge and they should admit in university for example in India numerous human beings want to go for higher education because in the abroad University in number of facilities are available related to study therefore universities are extremely helpful for students and others. Moving further teaching everyone should be free of cost because when poor person cannot pay fees then government can help poor person in this situation they should teach at free of cost as well as if much people are educated then unemployment rate can be decreased day by day for example in Australia there are 55% teachers teach free of cost. Hans government should apply some facilities for poor person. On the other hand if all children and others can admit in university then they cannot follow the rules related to discipline because when a student are admit in university then government need a large amount of money every year to run University like teacher salary new building and so on for example in India there are available primary schools where education is free of cost however teacher's face many problems related to discipline much teachers there for university can face a number of problems. In conclusion free University education is essential for every student to secure a hugely paid job in addition to free University can help poor person
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education
is a
hugely
increasing David a few individuals
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think
college
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education
should
be accessed
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each and every one
human
as well
as
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government
should assemble
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free
of
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cost
I
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agree
with this statement up to large extent the following essay will discuss it in forthcoming paragraph.
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video
to
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begin
with
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government
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showed
admission in
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university
will be easy for every
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person
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because
with the
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help
of
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University
human beings can obtain a plethora of knowledge
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related
to any subject
in addition
to in modern time
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folksare
interested in various kind of supreme like
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some
mankind interested in medical team
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oscommerce
and
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so
on if
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people
gained much
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knowledge and
they should admit in
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university
for example
in India numerous human beings want to go for higher
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education
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because
in the abroad
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University
in number of facilities are available
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related
to study
therefore
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universities
are
extremely
helpful for students
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and others
. Moving
further
teaching everyone should be
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free
of
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cost
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because
when
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poor
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person
cannot pay fees then
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government
can
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help
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poor
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person
in this situation they should teach at
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free
of
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cost
as well
as if much
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people
are educated
then unemployment rate can
be decreased
day by day
for example
in Australia there are 55% teachers teach
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free
of
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cost
. Hans
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government
should apply
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some
facilities for
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poor
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person
.
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if all children
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and others
can admit in
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university
then they cannot follow the
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rules
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related
to discipline
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because
when a student are
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in
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university
then
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government
need a large amount of money every year to run
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University
like teacher salary new building and
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so
on
for example
in India there are available primary schools where
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education
is
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free
of
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cost
however
teacher's face
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many
problems
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related
to discipline
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much
teachers there for
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university
can face a number of problems.
In conclusion
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free
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University
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education
is essential for every student to secure a
hugely
paid job
in addition
to
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free
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University
can
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help
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poor
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person
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IELTS essay Some people think University e education should be exceed accessedwhy every single person and government should make free of cost

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  American English
1 paragraphs
335 words
5.5
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