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Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the public is being bombarded with a huge amount of information which is usually considered to be irrelevant to people's lives. Hence, it is argued that reading the news in newspapers and watching television news programs are wasting time. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea due to several reasons which will be mentioned in this essay. On the one hand, there are some explanations for why people refuse to obtain the news. the most popular one is that the information from the news does not directly connect with their lives. It is obvious that we can not recognize any relationship between a worker's life and a report about the status of the war in the Middle East or the change political system of a country in the all the side of the world. However, I believe that it is just a lack of the perspective of how crucial information could be in one's life. On the other hand, staying up-to-date with the news animals people to gain enormous benefits in comparison with those who do not pay attention to the new information. Frequently reading news reports articles, regardless of the media used is a newspaper or a television program, citizens can understand the policies of the country clearly and thus can behave more appropriately. In addition, people who are being connected with the news can have great opportunity to broaden the Horizons in various features of their lives. They could accumulate not only a lot of solutions for tackling many issues which are often indicated in newspapers or programs on TV but also knowledge about the urgent phenomenon to share with their friends or relatives to strengthen the bonds among them. In conclusion, I want to reaffirm that acquiring news plays a vital role in people's lives. Although the advantages of this are depended on an individual's judgments, there is no waste of time in it.
Nowadays, the public is
being bombarded
with a huge amount of
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information
which is
usually
considered to be irrelevant to
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people
's
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lives
.
Hence
, it
is argued
that reading the
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news
in newspapers and watching television
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news
programs are wasting time. In my opinion, I
totally
disagree with this
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idea
due to several reasons which will
be mentioned
in this essay.

On the one hand, there are
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some
explanations for why
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people
refuse to obtain the
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news
. the most popular one is that the
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information
from the
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news
does not
directly
connect with their
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lives
. It is obvious that we can not recognize any relationship between a worker's life and a report about the status of the war in the Middle East or the
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change
political system of a country in the all the side of the world.
However
, I believe that it is
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just
a lack of the perspective of how crucial
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information
could be in one's life.
On the other hand
, staying up-to-date with the
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news
animals
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people
to gain enormous benefits
in comparison
with those who do not pay attention to the
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new
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information
.
Frequently
reading
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news
reports articles, regardless of the media
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used
is a newspaper or a television program, citizens can understand the policies of the country
clearly
and
thus
can behave more
appropriately
.
In addition
,
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people
who are
being connected
with the
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news
can have great opportunity to broaden the Horizons in various features of their
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lives
. They could accumulate not
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only
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a lot of
solutions for tackling
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many
issues which are
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often
indicated in newspapers or programs on TV
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but
also
knowledge about the urgent phenomenon to share with their friends or relatives to strengthen the bonds among them.

In conclusion
, I want to reaffirm that acquiring
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news
plays a vital role in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's
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lives
. Although the advantages of this
are depended
on an individual's judgments, there is no waste of time in it.
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IELTS essay Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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