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Some people think the most important skill nurses should have is having good medical knowledge. Others believe there are other more important qualities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that the most crucial facet of a good nurse is a sound knowledge of medical science. I firmly insist that along with those skills, they should have other traits such as empathy, attention to detail and persistence. In this essay, I will substantiate my view. On the one hand, nursing is a critical profession and it is indispensable that they have sufficient professional expertise. Nurses aid doctors in complex surgeries, kidney transplantation and drug administration to patients. Even small medical negligence from them can have severe consequences for human life. As such, they should know what they are doing and must have an excellent understanding of the fundamentals. For example, a health worker should know how to diagnose disease by looking at symptoms, analyze the patient records, advise various drugs and operate the medical equipment. On the other hand, numerous other characteristics are also imperative for a health worker. Firstly, they should have good patience. Sometimes, patients might be unwilling to consume medicines because of their frustration and pain from the sickness. In that case, a caregiver should remain calm and composed while persuading the patient to take the tablets. Secondly, a caretaker should be compassionate and caring. Love and affection from them are as important as medicines for the faster recovery of the patients. Sometimes older people need emotional care and children expect a nurse to massage on their hand after an injection. Such interpersonal skills cannot be learned from textbooks. Lastly, a good nurse should be meticulous in her tasks. If she is not careful while performing tasks such as mixing different drugs or collecting and examining different blood samples, it might have severe impacts. In conclusion, I reiterate that knowledge of medical science is necessary for nurses. However, other attributes such as perseverance, kindness and due diligence make them a great health worker.
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believe that the most crucial facet of a
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science. I
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traits such as empathy, attention to detail and persistence. In this essay, I will substantiate my view.

On the one hand, nursing is a critical profession and it is indispensable that they have sufficient professional expertise.
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Nurses
aid doctors in complex surgeries, kidney transplantation and drug administration to
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patients
. Even
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small
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medical
negligence from them can have severe consequences for human life. As such, they should know what they are doing and
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must
have an excellent understanding of the fundamentals.
For example
, a health worker should know how to diagnose disease by looking at symptoms, analyze the
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patient
records, advise various drugs and operate the
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medical
equipment.

On the
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other
hand, numerous
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other
characteristics are
also
imperative for a health worker.
Firstly
, they should have
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good
patience.
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,
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patients
might be unwilling to consume medicines
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of their frustration and pain from the sickness.
In that case
, a caregiver should remain calm and composed while persuading the
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patient
to take the tablets.
Secondly
, a caretaker should be compassionate and caring.
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and affection from them are as
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important
as medicines for the faster recovery of the
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patients
.
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older
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people
need emotional care and children
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expect
a
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nurse
to massage on their hand after an injection. Such interpersonal
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skills
cannot
be learned
from textbooks.
Lastly
, a
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good
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nurse
should be meticulous in her tasks. If she is not careful while performing tasks such as mixing
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different
drugs or collecting and examining
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different
blood samples, it might have severe impacts.

In conclusion
, I reiterate that knowledge of
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medical
science is necessary for
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nurses
.
However
,
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other
attributes such as perseverance, kindness and due diligence
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make
them a great health worker.
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IELTS essay Some people think the most important skill nurses should have is having good medical knowledge. Others believe there are other more important qualities.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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