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Living in big cities is becoming difficult or easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A number of individuals whether live in big Cities is difficult or not. I will discuss both views. Let us deliberate some compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference. To begin with, there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the given proclivity. Discussing first point, the most intrinsic one is that pollution. To justify, in present days, more and more people migrate from urban areas as compared to rural areas. Consequently lot of factories and industries which are available in cities which spew the pollution and they put adverse impact on human, s. Owing to that reason multitudes reeling under various health ailments. For instance, asthma, cardiovascular diseases as well as liver cancer and many more.
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Cities is difficult or not. I will discuss both views.
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compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference.

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begin
with, there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the
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given
proclivity. Discussing
first
point, the most intrinsic one is that pollution. To justify, in present days, more and more
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people
migrate from urban areas as compared to rural areas.
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Consequently
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lot of
factories and industries which are available in cities which spew the
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pollution and
they put adverse impact on human, s. Owing to that reason multitudes reeling under various health ailments.
For instance
, asthma, cardiovascular diseases
as well
as liver cancer and
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more.
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IELTS essay Living in big cities is becoming difficult or easier.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
120 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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