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Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that the action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.

Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that the action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference. PDBj
There are two different views on society related to climate change. Some people believe that everyone can assist for avoiding changes on climate, However, it is considered by some others that there is no use of human doings and just local authories and large businesses are able to make a change. On the next paragraphs of my essay I will attempt to make a discussion between these views and give my personal idea. On the one hand, there is no denying that at present aour environment needs help even it is done individually or by large companies. I am sure that everyone can make difference o n climate change with their attitude for their surroundings. For taking one instance for my opinion I should mention that I f government just pay for huge changes there will be no difference because people need to know about the results of their bad habits like threwing litters to any place, using plastic things which can not be recycled for the future. So everyone should feel responsibility for the effects of their doings. On the other hand, there are enough reasons on people to be of the second half notion and one of them is that If local authories do not encourage society with financial support ordinary people can not change anything because only the specific laws related to be eco-friendly change are able to make difference with restricting factories to produce things and also carbon dioxide that are harmful for the atmosphere. I believe this because when people such kind of things It will be stopped. Coming to the conclusion, I can say without any hesitation that inspite of having so many chances on the hand of local authories we should not forget about assistance of humans.
There are two
different
views on society related to climate
change
.
Some
people
believe that everyone can assist for avoiding
changes
on climate,
However
, it
is considered
by
some
others that there is no
use
of human doings and
just
local
authories
and large businesses are able to
make
a
change
. On the
next
paragraphs of my essay I will attempt to
make
a discussion between these views and give my personal
idea
.

On the one hand, there is no denying that at present
aour
environment needs
help
even it
is done
individually
or by large
companies
. I am sure that everyone can
make
difference o n climate
change
with their attitude for their surroundings. For taking one instance for my opinion I should mention that I f
government
just
pay for huge
changes
there will be no difference
because
people
need to know about the results of their
bad
habits like
threwing
litters to any place, using plastic things which can not
be recycled
for the future.
So
everyone should feel responsibility for the effects of their doings.

On the other hand
, there are
enough
reasons on
people
to be of the second half notion and one of them is that If local
authories
do not encourage society with financial support ordinary
people
can not
change
anything
because
only
the specific laws related to be eco-friendly
change
are able to
make
difference with restricting factories to produce things and
also
carbon dioxide that are harmful for the atmosphere. I believe this
because
when
people
such kind of things It will be
stopped
.

Coming to the conclusion, I can say without any hesitation that
inspite
of having
so
many
chances on the hand of local
authories
we should not forget about assistance of humans.
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IELTS essay Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that the action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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