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Some people think that student should learn the practical courses like computer ,other think that should learn the theoretical course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that student should learn the practical courses like computer, other think that should learn the theoretical course. Wy7dq
It is hotable debated issue, whether computer are useful to fulfill the desires or other assume that reading books are insensible for the learner to learn more. However, I will put shed on the both of the viewpoints and my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs. Analyzing the statement and explaining the future, first and foremost reason behind of this is that in non stop advance era, practical subjects are bring galore of facilities for the educators who want to execute the job in the technical companies to achieve the higher position nevertheless, qualification are also necessary in every workplace, without theoretically knowledge people are not viable to earn remuneration.
It is
hotable
debated issue, whether computer
are
useful to fulfill the desires or other assume that reading books are insensible for the learner to learn more.
However
, I will put shed on the both of the viewpoints and my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs. Analyzing the statement and explaining the future,
first
and foremost reason behind of this is that in non
stop
advance era, practical subjects are
bring
galore of facilities for the educators who want to execute the job in the technical
companies
to achieve the higher position
nevertheless
, qualification are
also
necessary in every workplace, without
theoretically
knowledge
people
are not viable to earn remuneration.
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IELTS essay Some people think that student should learn the practical courses like computer, other think that should learn the theoretical course.

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