Some People Think That Shops Should Not Be Allowed To Sell Food Or Drinks That Are Scientifically Proven To Be Bad For People’S Health. Do You Agree Or Disagree? v.3
Some People Think That Shops Should Not Be Allowed To Sell Food Or Drinks That Are Scientifically Proven To Be Bad For People’S Health. v. 3
An often debated topic is that whether the sales of unhealthy food or drinks should be banned at stores. Personally, I disagree with the idea that junk food are necessary for interdict, because I believe that there are still some benefits of them.
On the one hand, I agree that unhealthy diet can cause various health problems. For example, if people eat too much food which have poor quality and nutrition, they would easily lead to the increase of obesity, diabetes and heart disease. Although these foods often contain too much fat and spices like salt and sugar, consumers are still addicted because of its attractive color and flavour. As a result, people are increasingly overweight and another consequence is that the government must pay a lot of money for hospital and medical facilities to treat for those patient.
On the other hand, I suppose that unhealthy food or drinks are also important in several ways. First of all, people nowadays are fond of fast food and prepared meal rather home-cook food. They are cheap to buy and also easy to prepare, so with some people have busy life, these foods are clearly convenient for them. Secondly, many companies have been founded by the growth of fast food for many years. KFC and Coca-cola, for instance, have contributed significant part for the economy of America. With out them, we would witness the greatest declination in the world’s economy.
In conclusion, while unhealthy food or drinks affect people’s health. I believe that they should not to be banned at stores.
An
often
debated topic is that whether the sales of
unhealthy
food
or drinks should
be banned
at stores.
Personally
, I disagree with the
idea
that junk
food
are necessary for interdict,
because
I believe that there are
still
some
benefits of them.
On the one hand, I
agree
that
unhealthy
diet can cause various health problems.
For example
, if
people
eat too much
food
which have poor quality and nutrition, they would
easily
lead to the increase of obesity, diabetes and heart disease. Although these
foods
often
contain too much
fat
and spices like salt and sugar, consumers are
still
addicted
because
of its attractive color and
flavour
.
As a result
,
people
are
increasingly
overweight and another consequence is that the
government
must
pay
a lot of
money for hospital and medical facilities to treat for those patient.
On the other hand
, I suppose that
unhealthy
food
or drinks are
also
important
in several ways.
First of all
,
people
nowadays are fond of
fast
food
and prepared meal
rather
home-cook
food
. They are
cheap
to
buy
and
also
easy to prepare,
so
with
some
people
have busy life, these
foods
are
clearly
convenient for them.
Secondly
,
many
companies
have
been founded
by the growth of
fast
food
for
many
years. KFC and Coca-cola,
for instance
, have contributed significant part for the economy of America.
With out
them, we would witness the greatest declination in the world’s economy.
In conclusion
, while
unhealthy
food
or drinks affect
people’s
health. I believe that they should not to
be banned
at stores.
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