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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together.

Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. yVyP
It is true that individual’s IQ varies from person to person. Some people believe students should be allocated to different schools or classes which are compatible with their academic competence as it is beneficial to their academic performance. however, others holds that all students should be educated together regardless of their abilities. In my opinion, students should be educated together in lectures, but with separate tutorials. On the one hand, being taught according to their learning abilities can help students perform better in academic fields, because those with same abilities have similar learning speeds. Therefore, the teacher can focus more on the contents of the lecture without worrying someone cannot catch up with others. For instance, some schools have set up excellent-students classes where teachers have faster teaching speeds and deeper contents. As a result, the graduates turned out to be admitted into prestigious high schools or universities. Therefore, it is reasonable to educate pupils considering their abilities. On the flip side, some people think that separating students by the abilities does harm to their metal health, bot for brilliant students and ordinary students. It may lead to anxiety if there are too many good students together, as the competition among them will be extremely intense. Meanwhile, average students may suffer feelings of depression since they are excluded from their clever counterparts. Therefore, opponents think that the allocation of students should be banned, giving consideration of keeping mental health. In my opinion, students should study together with optional tutorials separately, during which teaching assistants will answer students’ questions separately. This provides students chances to both study together and at their own paces. In such cases, both mental health and academic performance are guaranteed.
It is true that individual’s IQ varies from person to person.
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competence as it is beneficial to their
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academic
performance.
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students
should
be educated
together regardless of their
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abilities
. In my opinion,
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students
should
be educated
together in lectures,
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with separate tutorials.

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being taught
according to their learning
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abilities
can
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help
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students
perform better in
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academic
fields,
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because
those with same
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abilities
have similar learning speeds.
Therefore
, the teacher can focus more on the contents of the lecture without worrying someone cannot catch up with others.
For instance
,
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some
schools have set up excellent-students classes where teachers have faster teaching speeds and deeper contents.
As a result
, the graduates turned out to
be admitted
into prestigious high schools or universities.
Therefore
, it is reasonable to educate pupils considering their abilities.

On the flip side,
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some
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people
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students
by the
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abilities
does harm to their metal health, bot for brilliant
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students
and ordinary
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students
. It may lead to anxiety if there are too
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many
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good
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students
together, as the competition among them will be
extremely
intense. Meanwhile, average
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students
may suffer feelings of depression since they
are excluded
from their clever counterparts.
Therefore
, opponents
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think
that the allocation of
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students
should
be banned
, giving consideration of keeping mental health.

In my opinion,
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students
should study together with optional tutorials
separately
, during which teaching assistants will answer
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students’
questions
separately
. This provides
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students
chances to both study together and at their
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own
paces. In such cases, both mental health and
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academic
performance
are guaranteed
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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