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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together.

Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. yVyP

It is true that individual’s IQ varies from person to person. Some people believe students should be allocated to different schools or classes which are compatible with their academic competence as it is beneficial to their academic performance. however, others holds that all students should be educated together regardless of their abilities. In my opinion, students should be educated together in lectures, but with separate tutorials. On the one hand, being taught according to their learning abilities can help students perform better in academic fields, because those with same abilities have similar learning speeds. Therefore, the teacher can focus more on the contents of the lecture without worrying someone cannot catch up with others. For instance, some schools have set up excellent-students classes where teachers have faster teaching speeds and deeper contents. As a result, the graduates turned out to be admitted into prestigious high schools or universities. Therefore, it is reasonable to educate pupils considering their abilities. On the flip side, some people think that separating students by the abilities does harm to their metal health, bot for brilliant students and ordinary students. It may lead to anxiety if there are too many good students together, as the competition among them will be extremely intense. Meanwhile, average students may suffer feelings of depression since they are excluded from their clever counterparts. Therefore, opponents think that the allocation of students should be banned, giving consideration of keeping mental health. In my opinion, students should study together with optional tutorials separately, during which teaching assistants will answer students’ questions separately. This provides students chances to both study together and at their own paces. In such cases, both mental health and academic performance are guaranteed.

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