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Some people think that schoolchildren should sometimes have geography lessons outdoors, in the open air. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples.

Some people think that schoolchildren should sometimes have geography lessons outdoors, in the open air. with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples. kAm8

traveling is hobbie for lots of people, it's one of the best way to relax. some people think that traveling alone is better than traveling with group, i do not agree with that idea to start with, traveling is too dangerous, it is all about where you are going, captain always have people on the ship board, pilot always have helping hand, not because they do not know their job, it is because that traveling alone is dangerous, worl is full of suprises. for example, my cousin went in forest for hunting alone, in the beginning he said that it would be funny and interesting, but he broked his leg when he was running and he returned home after three days, he said if there were someone, it would not be that hard. secondly, when you are traveling, you have a goal to see something, when you stand and looking whatever is that goal, you would be happy and when you are alone you can not talk anyone about your impression. it is good to be independent but sometimes its necessary to be with someone. to conclude, human is the individual, every of them have their own mind, but i strongly believe that traveling in groups, or just someone, is better than traveling alone

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some
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people
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think
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alone
 is better than traveling with group, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
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to
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start
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dangerous
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people
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because
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because
 that traveling You use this word too often, consider replacing it withonlyunattended
alone
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dangerous
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worl
 is full of Possible spelling mistake found.surprisessunrisessup risesuprises
suprises
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
 example, my cousin went in forest for hunting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withonlyunattended
alone
, in the beginning he said that it would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:amusinghumorous
funny
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but
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broked
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running and
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hard
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSecondly
secondly
, when you are traveling, you have a goal to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 something, when you stand and looking whatever is that goal, you would be happy and when you are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withonlyunattended
alone
 you can not talk anyone about your impression. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 to be independent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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sometimes
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be with someone.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
 conclude, human is the individual, every of them have their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 mind, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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i
strongly
 believe that traveling in groups, or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 someone, is better than traveling You use this word too often, consider replacing it withonlyunattended
alone