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Some people think that rich countries should helped poor countries by providing food and education while other argue that it is a goverments task to help for developement of nation i will discuss both views in my further paragraphs.

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Some people think that rich countries should helped poor countries by providing food and education while other argue that it is a goverments task to help for developement of nation i will discuss both views in my further paragraphs. To begin with ig rich countries support poor countries the relationship will developed between twocountries they also help back from another country when they need innowdays govt in white collar corrupted they spent money only on their personal works
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IELTS essay Some people think that rich countries should helped poor countries by providing food and education while other argue that it is a goverments task to help for developement of nation i will

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  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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