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Some people think that recent innovations in technology have made life more comfortable and helped us to be more efficient by saving us time, while others argue that technology has made us less efficient.

Some people think that recent innovations in technology have made life more comfortable and helped us to be more efficient by saving us time, while others argue that technology has made us less efficient. 56lKB
It is undeniable that technology has changed the world and individuals in various ways in modern times. Certain people believe that life has become plentiful convenient and more productive with the development of technological innovations. Despite having the positive impacts of innovation development few people argue the negative effects of technological inventions. I will bring the light on both the sides of technology initiatives. Technology has indeed become our lives more serenely. Nowadays, It is onerous to live without appliances and technological amenities. In this day and age, Most people have their mobile phones, pads, laptops, computers. These devices have made communication easier across the world. Presently, we can connect to anybody within a few seconds anywhere in the globe. Furthermore, With the help of the Internet, We can access the limitless amount of information from the comforts of our homes. The Internet has introduced many social media platforms where companies advertise their products and services. Certainly, technology has made our lives comfortable, but also a paramount part of it On another side, Digital devices have revealed harmful impacts on our entities. There are several types of side effects with the excessive use of modern tools such as- physical, health, social issues. Now, People are always staying connected to their mobile phones and social media accounts at all times. They carry their mobile phones everywhere to check their emails and texts. Furthermore, the Vast use of technology devices likely has affected upon socialism. There are numerous social media over the internet for example - Facebook, Snapchat, Instagram, and What app, etc. Which replaces real-life communication and ends with social isolation. In conclusion, Technological innovations make our lives comfortable. However, People are getting addicted to technologies day and day and lead to social loneliness. People should understand that Technology has been made for our benefit, We are not made for it.
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has
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changed
the world and individuals in various ways in modern times. Certain
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people
believe that life has become plentiful convenient and more productive with the development of
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technological
innovations. Despite having the
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positive
impacts of innovation development few
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people
argue the
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negative
effects of
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technological
inventions. I will bring the light on both the sides of
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technology
initiatives.

Technology has
indeed
become our
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lives
more
serenely
. Nowadays, It is onerous to
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live
without appliances and
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technological
amenities. In this day and age, Most
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people
have their mobile phones, pads, laptops, computers. These devices have made communication easier across the world.
Presently
, we can connect to anybody within a few seconds anywhere in the globe.
Furthermore
, With the
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help
of the Internet, We can access the limitless amount of information from the comforts of our homes. The Internet has introduced
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many
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social
media platforms where
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companies
advertise their products and services.
Certainly
,
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technology
has made our
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lives
comfortable,
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also
a paramount part of it

On another side, Digital devices have revealed harmful impacts on our entities. There are several types of side effects with the excessive
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use
of modern tools such as- physical, health,
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social
issues.
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Now
,
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People
are always staying connected to their mobile phones and
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social
media accounts at all times. They carry their mobile phones everywhere to
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check
their emails and texts.
Furthermore
, the Vast
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use
of
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technology
devices likely has
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affected
upon socialism. There are numerous
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social
media over the internet
for example
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Facebook, Snapchat, Instagram, and What app, etc. Which replaces real-life communication and ends with
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social
isolation.

In conclusion
,
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Technological
innovations
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make
our
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lives
comfortable.
However
,
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People
are getting addicted to
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technologies
day and day and lead to
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social
loneliness.
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People
should understand that
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Technology
has
been made
for our benefit, We are not made for it.
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IELTS essay Some people think that recent innovations in technology have made life more comfortable and helped us to be more efficient by saving us time, while others argue that technology has made us less efficient.

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4 paragraphs
310 words
7.5
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