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some people think that poor parents because of problem faced by the children . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Pelf plays part and parcel role in humans live without money adult life cannot survive. In this contemporary Era the majority of individuals believe that the underprivileged parents. Toddler have better life even the fact that some obstacles faced by them than the children of high range of family has various pros and cons which will be discussed in this upcoming paragraph. There are something you can't reason why majority of mass is a point that kid have better Lifestyle than the richer children. One of the foremost reason is, children learn a number of things from some problems which they placed in a poor families. To elaborate it, children learn how to fulfill their desired as well as many more our kids balance their work and how to operate with one another person. Consequently, it is not only help for enhanced cognitive bar but also no different way of to improve interpersonal skills. Further more, children of richer family prefer to spend money lavishly due to the fact that those adolescence do not know the need of cash. To explain it some of the individual those are milliners, they also buy the high quality things for their children without any demand so, this is the cause to became some children are stubborn stop. Moreover children also demand for hiring things but poor children do not think about their future does there is no doubt the underprivileged child have better life style ratherthan the richer. In conclusion, I firmly believe that having a member of poor family is essential to learn different kinds of diplomacies than the richer.

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live
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some of the
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so
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In conclusion
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