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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The task suggests that some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport and the other people think that the mental strength is more important. To explain this task the below comparisions are given. Firstly, In some sports physical strength is important and in some sports only mental strenth is required. For instance, If we take wristlling as the sport then one needs the physical strength to win the match. And if we take chess as the sort then mental stenth is important to win the match. So by this statement we cannot say only one is important. Secondly, in some sports any on is fine to win the sport. For example consider cricket as a sport in that for batting unit both physical strenth and mental strength is required. Physical strength is needed to hit big sixes where as mental strength is needed to hit sixes without ohysical strength but just analysing the timing of the ball. similarly in bowling unit spinners need mental streength to bowl in good line-up where as seemers need physical strength as to bowl the ball speed. Thirdly, There are some sports that require both physocal and mental strengths. Consider kabadi as a sport and in that the rider when he goes to ride has to be very striong and he has to understand who are playing well and he need to act upon. To conclude this I agree that both physical and mental strenghts are required to achive successs on the sport. It depends upon the sport which strength is imortant. One has to know what he want to that sport.
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physical
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strength
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important
for success in
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sport
and the other
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people
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that the
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mental
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important
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this task the below
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comparisions
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Firstly
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sports
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physical
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strength
is
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important
and in
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sports
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only
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mental
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strenth
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, If we take
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wristlling
as the
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sport
then one
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needs
the
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physical
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strength
to win the match. And if we take chess as the sort then
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mental
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stenth is
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to win the match.
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, in
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some
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sports
any on is fine to win the
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sport
.
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consider cricket as a
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sport
in that for batting unit both
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physical
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strenth
and
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mental
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strength
is required
.
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Physical
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strength
is needed
to hit
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big
sixes
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where as
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mental
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strength
is needed
to hit sixes without
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ohysical
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strength
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but
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analysing
the timing of the ball.

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similarly
in bowling unit spinners
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need
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mental
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streength
to bowl in
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good
line-up
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where as
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seemers
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need
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physical
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as to bowl the ball speed.

Thirdly
, There are
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some
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sports
that require both
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physocal
and
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mental
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strengths
. Consider
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kabadi
as a
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and in that the rider when he goes to ride
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be
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very
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striong and
he
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understand who are playing
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well and
he
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need
to act upon.

To conclude
this I
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physical
and
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mental
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strenghts
are required
to
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achive
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successs on
the
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. It depends upon the
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which
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is
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imortant
. One
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know what he
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IELTS essay Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
271 words
5.0
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