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Some people think that it is important to teach children the skill of handwriting. Do you agree or disagree?

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Quite a few people are of the perception that handwriting is an important skill and children must be taught how to write legibly. I agree to a certain extent with this opinion as handwriting is a basic skill but undue importance should not be focused on handwriting. Handwriting is one of the very first skills which a child learns. Legible and neat handwriting is a minimum requirement for kids these days. Handwriting is important since it will be used for the remainder of a child's life for various purposes. Handwriting is one of the first indicators of hand-eye coordination in children. Handwritten notes help children to retain and recall information efficiently. Also, writing helps kids to develop dexterity and expression. For instance, calligraphy classes are offered for all ages to express their love for various styles of writing. In addition to this, penmanship is valued around the world for presentation purposes. Handwriting should not be afforded unnecessary attention. Legible handwriting skills must be developed among children. However, in the digital era, the necessity for handwriting has reduced greatly for other skills for employment. For example, skills such as shorthand and typing are given precedence as work skills. Furthermore, children are now more technology-oriented and prefer to learn through online methods rather than the traditional method involving physical notes. To conclude, penmanship is a fundamental skill required in life. However, the global age is rendering it irrelevant over time but handwriting must be given some importance to ensure basic skills are inculcated among the impressionable minds.
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handwriting
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and
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children
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must
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. I
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agree
to a certain extent with this opinion as
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handwriting
is a basic
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skill
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but
undue importance should not
be focused
on handwriting.

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very
first
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skills
which a child learns. Legible and neat
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handwriting
is a minimum requirement for kids these days.
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Handwriting
is
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important
since it will be
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used
for the remainder of a child's life for various purposes.
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Handwriting
is one of the
first
indicators of hand-eye coordination in
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children
. Handwritten notes
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help
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children
to retain and recall information
efficiently
.
Also
, writing
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helps
kids to develop dexterity and expression.
For instance
, calligraphy classes
are offered
for all ages to express their
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love
for various styles of writing.
In addition
to this, penmanship
is valued
around the world for presentation purposes.

Handwriting should not
be afforded
unnecessary attention. Legible
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handwriting
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skills
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must
be developed
among
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children
.
However
, in the digital era, the necessity for
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handwriting
has
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reduced
greatly
for other
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skills
for employment.
For example
,
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skills
such as shorthand and typing are
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given
precedence as work
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skills
.
Furthermore
,
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children
are
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now
more technology-oriented and prefer to learn through online methods
rather
than the traditional method involving physical notes.

To conclude
, penmanship is a fundamental
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skill
required in life.
However
, the global age is rendering it irrelevant over time
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but
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handwriting
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must
be
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given
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some
importance to ensure basic
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skills
are inculcated
among the impressionable minds.
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is important to teach children the skill of handwriting.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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