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some people think that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them.

some people think that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. QVa3K

Different people have different ideas, so some people think that giving gifts and presents is a better way to show our affection for our near and dear ones, while others believe that there are other effective methods to show that we care and I agree with this. On my opinion, there are different ways of showing our love to the people around us for example there are few people who realize the accurate value of a relationship. They believe, it is more important to take time-out and sit with family or a friend, or physically help someone in finding a job, a new house, or nursing ailing parents or relieving someone out of miseries. On the other hand, these days people have become more materialistic in nature, and true aura of relationship is lost. People feel more valuable if they receive presents or a valuable item from someone. To illustrate, if parent warking overseas, they usually give ornaments and other expensive items to family members to show their love. To conclude, Although presents at times make loved ones happy, caring would keep them comfortable at all moments. In my opinion, I believe everyone needs physical support when the insist which is emotionally connected but not gifts or alms.

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