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Some People think that it is better to educateboys and girls in separate schools. Other however others believe that Boys and girls benefits more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some People think that it is better to educateboys and girls in separate schools. Other however others believe that Boys and girls benefits more from attending mixed schools. YaxQ
Irrefutably, it is debated whether Boys and girls study together or study detached. Hence the majority believe that Boys and girls should be study together while others strongly believe that it is more prefrable to study mixed. In the following essay I Will discuss both views and give my opinion. To begin with, there are a number of People Who support the idea that Boys and girls study together in school because there is some merit sides of this phenomenon. First fall if males and females study together as a result the quality of study strongly enhance because they have a tendency to play competetion each other about their education on top of that they can imrove public speaking and behaviour esspecially males near the female. As a matter of fact that People Who support this idea study separate can provide the pupils with a number of beneficial of usually Come up with the following opinion First and foremost if government organize study separate boys and girls as a consequence pupil make their consentrate in the some place because if they study together their dream wil be broken as well their knowledge decline in a short time. To sum up our discoussion above clearly demonstrate that although there are a number of merits both sides but it has enough negative sides.
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whether
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the majority believe that
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and
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girls
should be
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together while others
strongly
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mixed. In the following essay I Will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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with, there are a number of
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that
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and
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study
together in school
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because
there is
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some
merit sides of this phenomenon.
First
fall if males and females
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study
together
as a result
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study
strongly
enhance
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because
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competetion
each other about their education
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public speaking and
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As a matter of fact that
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and foremost if
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organize
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separate
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and
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as a consequence pupil
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make
their
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consentrate
in the
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some
place
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because
if they
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together their dream
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wil
be broken
as well
their knowledge decline in a short time.

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enough
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IELTS essay Some People think that it is better to educateboys and girls in separate schools. Other however others believe that Boys and girls benefits more from attending mixed schools.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
221 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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