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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine however at best these methods are ineffective and at worst that may be dangerous to what extent did you agree with this statement

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine however at best these methods are ineffective and at worst that may be dangerous to what extent did you agree with this statement dwgP
With the advancement of Science and Technology there are now several ways being found to cure a disease. As some Say alternative medicines are becoming more prominent. however, this may be ineffective at their best and can passes some danger if it react incorrectly. I think in the same manner and agree with this statement. My inclination is justified in following paragraphs. out of all my arguments, the strongest one to prove my view is that, these alternative forms of medicines are cheap and accessible. these medicines are easily available and thus the poor can also use them for the treatment of their disease. many citizens have shown a positive approach towards these types of medicine. for instance, a recent Medical Research shown that almost 50% population of England have more trust on traditional or natural medicines I think that due to their easily accessible nature this medicine have gained more popularity. Another point is that these medicines have less content of chemical substance used. the synthetic medicines when given in higher amount or with an irregular pattern can have a dangerous pattern in in the human body and internal organs. while, even though the alternative forms of medicines can be ineffective but these have a very less chance of giving harm to people it is only due to the use of natural substance in these medicines for example a study done an alternative medicines depicted that these medicine show a 10% probability to show negative effect on individual I think that they are gaining more trust due to their Safe Nature. to wind up, I would like to say that the alternative forms of medicines have a great scope of becoming the best type of medicines in the future.
With the advancement of Science and Technology there are
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now
several ways
being found
to cure a disease.
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As
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some
Say
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alternative
medicines are becoming more prominent.
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however
, this may be ineffective at their best and can
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passes
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some
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danger
if it
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react
incorrectly
. I
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think
in the same manner and
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agree
with this statement. My inclination
is justified
in following paragraphs.
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out
of all my arguments, the strongest one to prove my view is that, these
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alternative
forms of medicines are
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cheap
and accessible.
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these
medicines are
easily
available and
thus
the poor can
also
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use
them for the treatment of their disease.
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many
citizens have shown a
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positive
approach towards these types of
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medicine
.
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for
instance, a recent Medical Research shown that almost 50% population of England have more trust on traditional or natural medicines I
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think
that due to their
easily
accessible nature this
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medicine
have gained more popularity. Another point is that these medicines have less content of chemical substance
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used
.
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the
synthetic medicines when
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given
in higher amount or with an irregular pattern can have a
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dangerous
pattern
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in in
the human body and internal organs.
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while
,
even though
the
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alternative
forms of medicines can be ineffective
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but
these have a
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very
less chance of giving harm to
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people
it is
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only
due to the
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use
of natural substance in these medicines
for example
a study done an
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alternative
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medicines
depicted that these
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medicine
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show
a 10% probability to
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show
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negative
effect on individual I
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think
that they are gaining more trust due to their Safe Nature.
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to
wind up, I would like to say that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alternative
forms of medicines have a great scope of becoming the best type of medicines in the future.

IELTS essay Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine however at best these methods are ineffective and at worst that may be dangerous to what extent did you agree with this statement

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
290 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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