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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine however at best these methods are ineffective and at worst that may be dangerous to what extent did you agree with this statement

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine however at best these methods are ineffective and at worst that may be dangerous to what extent did you agree with this statement dwgP

With the advancement of Science and Technology there are now several ways being found to cure a disease. As some Say alternative medicines are becoming more prominent. however, this may be ineffective at their best and can passes some danger if it react incorrectly. I think in the same manner and agree with this statement. My inclination is justified in following paragraphs. out of all my arguments, the strongest one to prove my view is that, these alternative forms of medicines are cheap and accessible. these medicines are easily available and thus the poor can also use them for the treatment of their disease. many citizens have shown a positive approach towards these types of medicine. for instance, a recent Medical Research shown that almost 50% population of England have more trust on traditional or natural medicines I think that due to their easily accessible nature this medicine have gained more popularity. Another point is that these medicines have less content of chemical substance used. the synthetic medicines when given in higher amount or with an irregular pattern can have a dangerous pattern in in the human body and internal organs. while, even though the alternative forms of medicines can be ineffective but these have a very less chance of giving harm to people it is only due to the use of natural substance in these medicines for example a study done an alternative medicines depicted that these medicine show a 10% probability to show negative effect on individual I think that they are gaining more trust due to their Safe Nature. to wind up, I would like to say that the alternative forms of medicines have a great scope of becoming the best type of medicines in the future.

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now
 several ways being found
 to cure a disease. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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alternative
 medicines are becoming more prominent. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHowever
however
, this may be ineffective at their best and can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "pass"pass
passes
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some
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danger
 if it Did you mean "reacts"?reacts
react
incorrectly
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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agree
 with this statement. My inclination is justified
 in following paragraphs. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOut
out
 of all my arguments, the strongest one to prove my view is that, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdifferent
alternative
 forms of medicines are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 and accessible. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThese
these
 medicines are easily
 available and thus
 the poor can also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 them for the treatment of their disease. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMany
many
 citizens have shown a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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medicine
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
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think
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medicine
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used
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
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given
 in higher amount or with an irregular pattern can have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
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in in
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while
, even though
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdifferent
alternative
 forms of medicines can be ineffective This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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very
 less chance of giving harm to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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use
 of natural substance in these medicines for example
 a study done an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdifferent
alternative
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "medicine"?medicine
medicines
 depicted that these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpharmaceuticalmedicationantibioticdrugremedycure
medicine
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 a 10% probability to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
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think
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to
 wind up, I would like to say that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdifferent
alternative
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