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Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with you. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with you. v. 1
It is often argued by some that our colleagues should have similar thinking as we think. However, others believe that it is far better to choose friends who dare to interrupt your process of thinking. I think we ought to be having such friends who are not willing to agree with us all the time. On the one hand, when we have friends with a comparable level of thinking, there are always negligible thought disagreements. This means in every situation we face together, there is no different point of reflection. Another reason why having friends with the same beliefs as you can be helpful because it creates a healthy environment when we hand together. For instance, a survey was conducted by the prominent university, which indicates that any individual spends more time with their friends than their family members. Thus, the above-given reasons are better supports to choose friends in the same way of thinking. On the other hand, our partners with different thoughts can be supportive in many ways, and I agree. There is always a better scope of improvement when we have someone around us to point out our mistakes. This leads to productive discussions, by which we can figure out our weaknesses and workout on them. Furthermore, such friends believe in honest reviews. In other words, unbiased comments are required to be a capable person. To encapsulate, despite having different views, it is far better to have friends with unique ways of thinking, as it creates a healthy environment, and it brings positive reviews regarding our mistakes.
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that our colleagues should have similar
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.
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who dare to interrupt your process of
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. I
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think
we ought to be having such
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friends
who are not willing to
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agree
with us all the time.

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friends
with a comparable level of
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thinking
, there are always negligible
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thought
disagreements. This means in every situation we face together, there is no
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different
point of reflection. Another reason why having
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friends
with the same beliefs as you can be helpful
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because
it creates a healthy environment when we hand together.
For instance
, a survey
was conducted
by the prominent university, which indicates that any individual spends more time with their
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friends
than their family members.
Thus
, the above-
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given
reasons are
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better
supports to choose
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friends
in the same way
of thinking.

On the other hand
, our partners with
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different
thoughts can be supportive in
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many
ways, and I
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agree
.

There is always a
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better
scope of improvement when we have someone around us to point out our mistakes. This leads to productive discussions, by which we can figure out our weaknesses and workout on them.
Furthermore
, such
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friends
believe in honest reviews.
In other words
, unbiased comments
are required
to be a capable person.

To encapsulate, despite having
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different
views, it is far
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better
to have
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friends
with unique ways of
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thinking
, as it creates a healthy environment, and it brings
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positive
reviews regarding our mistakes.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with you. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
260 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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