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Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe

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It is argued that saving money is the best value for the economy rather than spending it. I completely agree with this statement due to decrease the pressure in the government and less financial problems. Expending cashes is serious phenomenon these days. people starts spending their money without thinking because the advertising which entices them to buy items they do not need them. Cambridge University found that 66%of costumers purchase unnecessary products brander the way that reflects the through media commercial. As a result persons buy thing even if they do not need them. On the other hand, numerous persons think that keeping money is better than squander it. To clear exemplify, were

It is argued
 that saving money is the best value for the economy rather
 than spending it. I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this statement due to decrease the pressure in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 and less financial problems. Expending cashes is serious phenomenon these days. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.start
starts
 spending their money without thinking This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the advertising which entices them to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 items they do not need them. Cambridge University found that 66%of costumers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 unnecessary products brander the way that reflects the through media commercial. As a result
 persons This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 thing even if they do not need them. On the other hand
, numerous persons This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that keeping money is better than squander it. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 exemplify, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphwere.were!were?were:were,were;
were