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Some people think that interview is not reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods

Some people think that interview is not reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods BYB9a
In 21st century, workforce has becomes more critical part of tiny firm and large menufecturer hence most of industries have been using various types of methods for choosing employees. Some crowd believe that face to face process is not right method of choosing workers. I completely disagree with this statement. There are several reasons for this view that will be discussed. To begin, nowadays most of prestigious firms have using interview method for required employees. Helping this method companies can know about nature of an employee, various types of working skills etc. Some employees are having supermaly lazy but interview is best way knowing all information about an employees. For instance, report of “ THE BUSINESS MAGAZINE” did published in 2020. Article about workforce that 94 % mini firm and big companies have used personal method for selecting person in it. However, most of industries do utilise jend writting test technice for pick staff but help of this process company know about workers' mathematical knowledge and writting skill. Secondly, few firms have use practical skill plum for new staff due to the fact corporation has realised workers' production speed, transparency, sophisticated etc. For example, surway of “THE TIMES OF INDIA” in 2019. The report explain that 32 percent company had use practical method and test base method for take staff. To sum up, selecting method is totally depend on companies activities. I personally believe that variable method is more accurate and innovative. Consequently, this process is positive for choosing workforce.
In 21st century, workforce has becomes more critical part of tiny
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firm
and large
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menufecturer
hence
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most of industries
have been using various types of
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methods
for choosing
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employees
.
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Some
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crowd
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believe
that face to face process is not right
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method
of choosing workers. I completely disagree with this statement. There are several reasons for this view that will
be discussed
.

To
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begin
, nowadays most of prestigious
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firms
have using interview
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method
for required
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employees
. Helping this
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method
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companies
can know about nature of an
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employee
, various types of working
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skills
etc.
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Some
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employees
are having
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supermaly
lazy
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but
interview
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is best
way knowing all information about an
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employees
.
For instance
, report of
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“
THE BUSINESS MAGAZINE” did
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published
in 2020. Article about workforce that 94 % mini
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firm
and
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big
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companies
have
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used
personal
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method
for selecting person in it.

However
,
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most of industries
do
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utilise
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jend
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writting
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test
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technice
for pick staff
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but
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help
of this process
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company
know about workers' mathematical knowledge and
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writting
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skill
.
Secondly
, few
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firms
have
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use
practical
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skill
plum for new staff due to the fact corporation has
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realised
workers' production speed, transparency, sophisticated etc.
For example
,
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surway
of “THE TIMES OF INDIA” in 2019. The report
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explain
that 32 percent
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company
had
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use
practical
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method
and
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test
base
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method
for take staff.

To sum up, selecting
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method
is
totally
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depend
on
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companies
activities. I
personally
believe that variable
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method
is more accurate and innovative.
Consequently
, this process is
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positive
for choosing workforce.
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IELTS essay Some people think that interview is not reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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