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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. lBoQ
Climate change has been one of the most discussed topic over the past few years. From activists who campaign and try to educate others on the risks of a climate crisis, to people who don't believe in its existence, what is sure is that everyone is talking about it. But is this really such an important matter? Is it necessary to spend our time talking about pollution, global warming and climate change? Certainly each one of use could just decide to save time and accept the situation, trying to direct more energies into finding a way to live with it, instead of a method to solve the problem. However tempting this prospect may be, it's wrong the choice. We should not surrender to the situation as it is, but we should try harder to revert or at least mitigate the damages that human actions caused. The first reason why we should do it is that we consider the situation bearable now, in the present days, but we have no idea how worse it will get in the future. If we only search for methods to survive to this status quo, instead of trying to solve it, we are basically continuing the problem, giving the future generations a much bigger issue to deal with without any practical means to face it. Secondly, by merely settling on finding a way to live with the problem we are implicitly condoning it. It is already well known that the major cause of climate change and global warming are not the single people who may use one too many plastic straws or take the car more than a certain number of times each week. The biggest problem are companies and societies whose internal politics don't respect the environment and allow too much waste production and pollution. If we decide to settle on living with this issue, these behaviours will continue to be held and the situation is only going to get worse. Last but not least, we are already behind on the schedule if we wanted to find solutions to co-exist with the current climate situation and the proofs are right in front of us. In the present days, many countries are facing weather conditions which wouldn't have manifested if it hadn't been for climate change and each one of these countries has already revealed to be unprepared. One example is the current situation in the state of Texas, which normally enjoys a warm weather, even during the months of winter. Well, now the temperature in many texan cities have experienced drastic drops and the people are suffering: because of the cold, electricity is gone and families have now no means to produce heat in their own houses. But this is just one of the consequences: since the temperature is now much lower than usual, the water inside of pipes froze, causing them to explode and leaving many people without water for several days. In addition, due to abundance of snow on highways and roads, the inhabitants of the cities are also facing many problems in finding food. The problem is only made worse by the inability of supermarkets to refurnish their stores. A situation like this is highly unusual and it is most likely caused by climate change itself. In conclusion, finding a way to live with the problem is the worst solution we could find. We need to face and recognize the problem, helding the culprits responsible and forcing them to make better choices, while also trying to conduce a lifestyle more respectful of the environment.
Climate
change
has been one of the most discussed topic over the past few years. From activists who campaign and try to educate others on the
risks
of a
climate
crisis, to
people
who don't believe in its existence, what is sure is that everyone is talking about it.

But
is this
really
such an
important
matter? Is it necessary to spend our time talking about pollution, global warming and
climate
change
?
Certainly
each one of
use
could
just
decide to save time and accept the
situation
, trying to direct more energies into
finding
a way to
live
with it,
instead
of a method to solve the problem.

However
tempting this prospect may be, it's
wrong
the choice. We should not surrender to the
situation
as it is,
but
we should try harder to revert or at least mitigate the damages that human actions caused.

The
first
reason why we should do it is that we consider the
situation
bearable
now
, in the present days,
but
we have no
idea
how worse it will
get
in the future. If we
only
search for methods to survive to this status quo,
instead
of trying to solve it, we are
basically
continuing the
problem
, giving the future generations a much bigger issue to deal with without any practical means to face it.

Secondly
, by
merely
settling on
finding
a way to
live
with the
problem
we are
implicitly
condoning it. It is already well known that the major cause of
climate
change
and global warming are not the single
people
who may
use
one too
many
plastic straws or take the car more than a certain number of times each week. The biggest
problem
are
companies
and societies whose internal politics don't respect the environment and
allow
too much waste production and pollution. If we decide to settle on living with this issue, these
behaviours
will continue to
be held
and the
situation
is
only
going to
get
worse.

Last
but
not least, we are already behind on the schedule if we wanted to find solutions to co-exist with the
current
climate
situation
and the proofs are right in front of us. In the present days,
many
countries are facing weather conditions which wouldn't have manifested if it hadn't been for
climate
change
and each one of these countries has already revealed to
be unprepared
. One example is the
current
situation
in the state of Texas, which
normally
enjoys a warm weather, even during the months of winter. Well,
now
the temperature in
many
texan
cities have experienced drastic drops and the
people
are suffering:
because
of the
cold
, electricity
is gone
and families have
now
no means to produce heat in their
own
houses
.
But
this is
just
one of the consequences: since the temperature is
now
much lower than usual, the water inside of pipes froze, causing them to explode and leaving
many
people
without water for several days.
In addition
, due to abundance of snow on highways and roads, the inhabitants of the cities are
also
facing
many
problems
in
finding
food. The
problem
is
only
made worse by the inability of supermarkets to refurnish their stores. A
situation
like this is
highly
unusual and it is most likely caused by
climate
change
itself.

In conclusion
,
finding
a way to
live
with the
problem
is the worst solution we could find. We need to face and recognize the
problem
,
helding
the culprits responsible and forcing them to
make
better choices, while
also
trying to conduce a lifestyle more respectful of the environment.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

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593 words
5.5
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