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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change,we need to find a way to live with it.

Climate change is problematic issue that we are not able to dodge. Some people consider that it is possible to get used to it and live with this acute problem. I strongly disagree with this opinion. Due to world problems such as deforestation, global warming, air pollution and so on and so forth, to my mind the only way to survive and tackle this problem is to start acting. First of all, I reckon that people are not well-educated about this issue and do not know many things about consequences. They are not think twice before behave harmfully for Earth. Nowadays, in Antarctica thousand of ice melt. However, many people do not even notice it. From my point of view, govenmernt must conduct awareness campains with especially children. In schools there are no subjects where they can learn about the environment. About two years ago, in my country there was one event called ‘Survive the world’. The organizators of it collected money from people and then plented thousand of trees. Such kind of acts has little impact of climate but it is still necessary. In my opinion, the easiest way to reduce air pollution is to mitigate the usage of cars. As individuals, much less people really need to commute by cars. We are able to utilize bicycles or public transport. It will have significant impact on Earth. To sum up everything that has been stated, under these circumstances we should not contribute to the development of this problems and try to cope with it.
Climate
change
is problematic issue that we are not able to dodge.
Some
people
consider that it is possible to
get
used
to it and
live
with this acute
problem
. I
strongly
disagree with this opinion. Due to world
problems
such as deforestation, global warming, air pollution and
so
on and
so
forth, to my mind the
only
way to survive and tackle this
problem
is to
start
acting.

First of all
, I reckon that
people
are not well-educated about this issue and do not know
many
things about consequences. They are not
think
twice
before
behave
harmfully
for Earth. Nowadays, in Antarctica
thousand
of ice melt.
However
,
many
people
do not even notice it. From my point of view,
govenmernt
must
conduct awareness
campains
with
especially
children. In schools there are no subjects where they can learn about the environment. About two years ago, in my country there was one
event
called ‘Survive the world’. The
organizators
of it collected money from
people
and then
plented
thousand of trees. Such kind of acts has
little
impact of climate
but
it is
still
necessary.

In my opinion, the easiest way to
reduce
air pollution is to mitigate the usage of cars. As individuals, much
less
people
really
need to commute by cars. We are able to utilize bicycles or public transport. It will have significant impact on Earth.

To sum up everything that has
been stated
,
under these circumstances
we should not contribute to the development of
this
problems
and try to cope with it.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
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