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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. 15Ljq
Few topics have drawn as much scholarly attention as despite of improving weather problems, people should adopt to live with it, especially in the past few years. Although. there is substantial opposition to this trend, I am of the opinion that this opposition is unwarranted, as it fails to take into account the countless benefits entwined with modifying the climate threats are more inevitable compare to become habitual to live with it. A number of benefits can be attributed to remodeling the environmental issues. On the one hand, by promoting renewable energy through the government, people can automatically infulenced to increase the use of such energy as solar, wind and the like, thus its biggest positive impact on climate prevantions. On the other hand, with a variety of small habits to grow in individual's lifestyle such as less flying, use public transport or bicycle, avoid over packaging goods or food and many more, one can immensely contribute to reform the climate condition. There is no doubt that all these merits of mitigating the earth tamprature and global warming will hold human in good stead as far as tackling the deteriorate environmental changes is concerned. The example of this scenario can be seen in the India's prime minister started the " clean India" campagin in 2014 and gradually thousand of people joined in this movement, so this a potential step to measure the clean weather. Admittedly, it is true that increasing global warming, human can not survive in the future, it may be become cause of extinting human civilisation and one can not dismiss the deleterious effects associated with it. However, these drawbacks appear to be insignificant againts the deluge of benefits that turn the living attitued with climate crises. In conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the concerns regarding living with harmful condition of weather. Neverthelees, i feel that the role of reconciling the climate in reducing earthquakes and unexpected climate conditions as well as one can live a healthy and a longer lifespan is instrumental indeed.
Few topics have drawn as much
scholarly
attention as
despite of
improving weather problems,
people
should
adopt to
live
with it,
especially
in the past few years. Although.
there
is substantial opposition to this trend, I am of the opinion that this opposition
is unwarranted
, as it fails to take into account the countless benefits entwined with modifying the
climate
threats are more inevitable compare to become habitual to
live
with it.

A number of benefits can
be attributed
to remodeling the environmental issues. On the one hand, by promoting renewable energy through the
government
,
people
can
automatically
infulenced
to increase the
use
of such energy as solar, wind and the like,
thus
its biggest
positive
impact on
climate
prevantions
.
On the other hand
, with a variety of
small
habits to grow in individual's lifestyle such as less flying,
use
public transport or bicycle, avoid over packaging
goods
or food and
many
more, one can
immensely
contribute to reform the
climate
condition. There is no doubt that all these merits of mitigating the earth
tamprature
and global warming will hold human in
good
stead as far as tackling
the deteriorate
environmental
changes
is concerned
. The example of this scenario can be
seen
in the India's prime minister
started
the
"
clean India
"
campagin
in 2014 and
gradually
thousand
of
people
joined
in this movement,
so
this a potential step to measure the clean weather.

Admittedly
, it is true that increasing global warming, human can not survive in the future, it may
be become
cause of
extinting
human
civilisation
and one can not dismiss the deleterious effects associated with it.
However
, these drawbacks appear to be insignificant
againts
the deluge of benefits that turn the living
attitued
with
climate
crises.

In conclusion
, I would not wish to underestimate the concerns regarding living with harmful condition of weather.
Neverthelees
,
i
feel that the role of reconciling the
climate
in reducing earthquakes and unexpected
climate
conditions
as well
as one can
live
a healthy and a longer lifespan is instrumental
indeed
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

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