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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. bYERB
A major portion of people believe conducting an international sports event might increase countries reputation in all aspects while few others think it would be a bad idea. I certainly believe in many countries hosting an international sports event could bring raise in economy however, in few countries it ardent to host such events. This essay will outline the pros and cons from the points to prove the argument. On the one hand, hosting an international sports event in undeveloped and wealthy countries could cause burden and conjestion in these countries. For instance, recently a world organisation conducted a survey from the people around the globe resultantly eventhough all countries are showing tendency towards hosting international sports event but public in rich countries like China, Russia, and USA are already facing conjestions to accomidate localades moreover countries like ukrane, iran, and iraq are still facing difficulties to fullfill the basic needs of there countries so hosting an event like this could be burden for them. To handle an international sports event a country should be capable of accomidating overwhelming people from other countries and a decent economy to make raise in it. On the other hand, hosting an international sports event in already developing countries would embark the bolsters in all aspects. For instance, throughout the globe the benevolent firms are ecstatic to commece their projects in developing countries like India, Canada, and UK because of controlled population and raising economy. So hosting an international sports event in developing countries could be astonishing for the sport conducted and for the country to spike in economy. To recapitulate, i firmly advocate a country should be choosen for international sports event by outlining the various advantages of the country instead choosing according to the wealth of the country.
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sports
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event
might increase
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countries
reputation in all aspects while few others
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think
it would be a
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countries
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hosting
an
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international
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sports
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event
could bring raise in economy
however
, in few
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countries
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ardent to host such
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events
. This essay will outline the pros and cons from the points to prove the argument.

On the one hand,
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an
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international
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sports
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event
in undeveloped and wealthy
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countries
could cause burden and
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conjestion
in these
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countries
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conducted a survey from the
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people
around the globe
resultantly
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eventhough
all
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countries
are showing tendency towards
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hosting
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international
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sports
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event
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public in rich
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countries
like China, Russia, and USA are already facing
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conjestions
to
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accomidate
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like this could be burden for them. To handle an
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a
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should be capable of
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and a decent economy to
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make
raise in it.

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,
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in already developing
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would embark the bolsters in all aspects.
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commece
their projects in developing
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like India, Canada, and UK
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of controlled population and raising economy.
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an
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sports
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event
in developing
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countries
could be astonishing for the
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sport
conducted and for the
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country
to spike in economy.

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i
firmly
advocate a
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choosen
for
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international
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sports
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event
by outlining the various advantages of the
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country
instead
choosing according to the wealth of the
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country
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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